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PostSubject: Tizen Doragonhato   Sat Jun 23, 2012 1:39 am





"My grandfather told me of a very special person."


    Name: Tizen
    Middle: Lyeon
    Surname: Doragohato
    Age: 18
    Gender: Male
    Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual

    Overall Appearance: Tiz isn't really picky about how one looks but he isn't really one to follow the dress code himself. Tiz stands at an height of 6' 4, weighing in at a decent weight of 201. Going on to his actual appearance Tiz's hair is long and untamed, reaching down past his shoulders to his chest at the least. His hair does not have one color it is a cross between black and white as he was born this way. moving on to his eyes, they are a crimson red, they often get brighter or darker depending on how he reacts to certain things. His skin is light but slightly tanned. His facial features, his smile in particular, often gives off a good vibe despite the dark foreboding eyes.
    Overall Persona: Tiz is one of those chilled and laid back kind of people usually letting people do what they please until shit gets out of hand or he needs them to just chill the hell out. Tiz isn't one to let his authority to be trampled over and he hates to be challenged and have his authority put in question unless it is by someone ranking over him. Other then that Tiz is chilled he would let the people around them have their way and enjoy themselves unless it's shit they have no business doing or he doesn't think is right, and sometimes he himself may join the endeavors around him and enjoy himself.

    Tiz generally is off chilling by himself as he enjoys the quiet and sometimes he is seen anti social because of it. He himself has often thought of himself as an anti social person sometimes and yet he is social all at the same time. He loves being around others and being by himself so to him it doesn't matter to him it could be either or.

    Entering combat Tiz personality doesn't really change all that much, at least not until he is injured in some kind of way it is then that his inner demons become known. It is as if something has possessed him, his voice becomes deeper, his actions more bold, and his personailty to everyone and everything has grown slightly harsher maybe due to his Dragon blood. This also happens when he is enraged by certain things but he is learning to control it.

    Fears: He fears betrayal, he can't stand the fact that someone he has placed his trust and placed complete faith in would go and betray that trust and place everyone he knows and loves in danger

    Likes: Respect, Its a big thing when it comes down to the better man which is why Nami treats it in high regards. He believes should be earned and never demanded. Women, Like any other man Nami has those feelings toward woman. He is attracted to them as if it were some sort of magnetic and he was the metal. Although he does know not to cross the boundaries and respect a woman's wishes. Friends or Allies, Nami is a peaceful enough guy he is always willing to encountered new people and makes new friends which makes him easy to get along with. good comments about himself, Nami is always willing to listen to people who praise him on good decisions or things such as that it boosts his confidence and morale. Smart Decisions, Nami isn't as calculating as you would think but he isn't one to be brash and hot headed unless it is a sensitive subject. Besides that Nami reads the situation and decides what must be done from there. Reading, Nami is one of those guys that actually calm down, sit in one place and just read unlike most of the males around him. Relaxing, Is something that Nami does on a daily basis once all his duties and chores are complete its nothing but smooth sailing for Nami.

    Dislikes: Petty arguments, Nami sees these as unnecessary and pointless especially if the issue isn't resolved in the end. When things like this appear Nami tends to get slightly irritated and may or may not intervene. Paper work, Nami can not stand it, at the sight of it you can tell Nami's frustration is setting in.
    Annoyances, These instantly set Nami off, when people are constantly calling his name or something annoying such as that Nami tends to rage off on them, not because he's mad more or less it's because they need to STFU. Retarded questions, I mean com'on there is no real need to be asking something that you already know or someone else already knows, hearing these sends Nami straight into a face palm.

    Catch Phrase: "I'll show you a fate worse then death"





I.D. U N K N O W N



"Sad thing is, they weren't very important when starting out.."


    Village: Sukaigakure
    Rank: Anbu Leader
    Bloodline: Ryū no sosen
    Elements: Raiton, Katon, Fuuton
    Specialization: Kenjutsu, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu
    Beginning Chakra: 245
    Beginning Stamina: 275




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    Village: Sukaigakure
    Rank: Anbu Leader
    Bloodline: Ryū no sosen
    Elements: Raiton, Katon, Fuuton
    Specialization: Kenjutsu, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu
    Beginning Chakra: 265
    Beginning Stamina: 295






B L O O D . T Y P E



"He was from a rare family, I don't think they exist."


    Name: Doragonhato
    Clan Type: Shinobi
    Kekkei Genkai: Members of the supposed Doragonhāto have the distinct ability to transform any part of their body into that of a dragons, with all the benefits as well. Benefits being if you were to change your arm their strength would increase 20%, or your eyes perception and visual Prowess 20% and so on and so forth, changing forms costs 5 chakra per change. Other forms that can be shifted are as follows, Nose and Tongue - Scent and Taste, Tail - no special abilities, Ears - Sound. Gaining mastery over the clans KKG ( S - Rank and SS Rank) gives the user full mastery over the abilities, allowing him/her to use all the abilities at once (10 Chakra) or seperatly without changing the form or appearance.
    Clan Element: N/A
    Clan History: The Clan that is the Doragonhāto has been around sense that of the creation of the very earth we humans walk on today. The first Doragonhāto ever to walk this earth is that of the Earth Doragonhāto she herself created the land and would be the guardian of the land. With the birth of her children she would pass on her legacy to the next generation. Back then the Doragonhāto clan was widely known throughout the world and was a thriving clan indeed. The clan was headed by three Representatives who would lead the clan and make group decisions for everyone. This process worked for years that is until the newest Reps ensued into intense indecision between each other. As they argued day in and out and not reaching an agreement on anything the clan began to fear that they would began fall apart.

    Their ideas didn't fall far from the tree the 3 Reps finally reached their climax and began ensue into battle, separating the clan into their own little militias. The clan, now engaged an in internal struggle over power began losing members quickly. For months the battles raged throughout the lands until finally it was time to take control of the situation. Tana Doragonhāto would be the one to stand up to the might of the Reps as she over powered them all and forced them to listen. She explained what this petty fight was doing to the clan, she continued on to say that there would no longer be Representatives for the clan, no there would be only one person to lead the entire clan as a whole and she would be the first to accept that role. As the battles subsided and soon became nothing but distant memories that now road along the winds of change. Years passed and soon Tana was married and bore a child, his name Tizen Doragonhāto the first heir to the throne. As Tana soon enough passed on to the next world, Tizen inherited the clan as he was supposed to and now leads the clan through the new age of the shinobi, what new secrets are held in store for the young Doragonhāto and his family only time will tell..........





P A S S E D & L E A R N E D



"He was strong, weapon and jutsu wise. Right?"

Elemental Jutsu[s]


{Clan Jutsu}
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(Part of the S-rank) Fire Breath
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Wind Gust
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    Jutsu Name: Raiton: False Darkness Spear
    Rank: B
    Element: Raiton
    Range: 17 feet
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Description: The user emits lighting from there hand and forms it into a spear. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies. The spear is 6 ft in length and when thrown caan travel at a max speed of 28 mph. If the spear makes contact with its target the area hit will begin to go numb and wont be usuable for 4 posts. Once thrown the spear can not be directed unless the user catches it and throws it into another direction. The spear can split into 3 different spears each time used has a cooldown of 6 posts usable 3 times per topic..
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    Name: Raiton: Final Dragon Strike
    Rank: B-S
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Element: Lightning
    Range: 100 ft.
    Description: After charging lightning into ones sword, the user slashes and releases an electrically charged dragon head made of lightning towards the opponent. The lightning Dragon flashes towards the opponent only a split second after, making this attack extremely hard to dodge and point blank range,, nearly impossible. The contact leaves the skin as black as ink from the effects. The dragon can be charged in three sizes with three different results. No Handseals.

    B Rank: Half Human Size - Dragon can slam into opponent, able to knock an opponent back with the force of three football hits combined. Leaves electrically charged first degree burns across the enemy if they arent able to dodge. This stage only, can be released by charging into the arm and slashing arm like a sword. 1 post charge. 2 post cooldown.

    A Rank: Human Size - Dragon slams into opponent, able to knock an opponent b ack with the force of a car at 40 mph, and tears through the enemy. Leaves electrically charged second degree burns and paralysis over the lower body. 2 post charge. 5 post cooldown.

    S Rank: Double Human Size - Dragon slams into opponent, able to knock them back with the force of a freight train at 55 mph, and tears through the enemy. Leaves electrically charged third degree burns and the opponent paralyzed for one post, if it doesnt kill them all together from the massive shock. 3 post charge. Twice per battle at this level.
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    Name: Cloud-Style Flame Beheading
    Rank: B
    Element: Katon
    Type: Kenjutsu
    Range: 25 ft from user
    Description: 3 post charge time, The user first imbues their blade with fire, before slashing in the direction of the desired enemy, resulting in the creation of large arcs of intense flame that follow the trajectory of the previous swing. A skilled user of this technique, such as Atsui, is capable of surrounding their immediate area with a circular wall of flames, incinerating multiple targets even if they approach from numerous angles simultaneously. {on contact 1st degree burns and temporary numbness in that are for 2 posts}.
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    Name: Twin Blaze destruction
    Rank: B
    Element: Katon, Fuuton
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Range: Long {25 ft from user}
    Description: The user release a combo of a wind tornado and adds fire into the mix cause a giant flaming tornado. The tornado once launched only heads in the direction it was launched in. The Tornado can move up to 15 MPH, the tornado it self spins at about 23 MPH, also the twister it self is about 33 feet and the top of it is 48 inches in diameter. If the opponet is caught in the twister then he will be repeatedly be attacked by wind slahes that cause 3 inch deep gashes and or small fire slashes that cause second degreee burns unless he/she can escape or until the jutsu runs out. The jutsu can only last but so long about 1 posts and has a cooldown 5 in between.
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    Name: Cloud-Style Front Beheading
    Canon/Custom: Canon (Manga)
    Rank: D
    Element: Fuuton
    Type: Ninjutsu, Kenjutsu
    Range: 25 ft from user
    Description: The user slashes forward sending a wave of fuuton chakra at an enemy each wave 9 feet in size. The strength of the slash is able to cut through a rock like butter but is weaker against chakra inhanced rocks and or metals.
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    Name: Cloud-Style Crescent Moon Beheading
    Canon/Custom: Canon (Manga)
    Rank: C
    Element: Fuuton (Wind)
    Type: Ninjutsu, Kenjutsu
    Range: 25 ft from user
    Description: The user swings their sword in a single, large, crescent moon-shaped arc, which occurs with such ferocious velocity that the technique can be employed in situations where only a very limited time to react is available. The swing can be used to counter attacks from multiple opponents simultaneously.
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    Name: Cloud-Style Reverse Beheading
    Canon/Custom: Canon (Manga)
    Rank: C
    Element: Fuuton
    Type: Ninjutsu, Kenjutsu
    Range: 25 ft from user
    Description: The user does a powerful spin, generating the momentum needed to slash at any opponents behind them. The user can also utilise this spinning motion to trick an enemy that's in front of them. The enemy is fooled into thinking the user will attack them, but instead the user attacks the targets behind the user. {Power and sizes matches that of front beheading}

Non-Elemental Jutsu[s]



    Name: Bunshin no Jutsu
    Rank: E
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Element: -
    Range: -
    Description: Hand Seals; Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance and thus this clone can do absolutely no damage at all in any way. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse. The number of clones able to be produced is determined by the user's rank as follows. D Rank; 2 Clones. C Rank; 3 Clones. B Rank; 4 Clones. A Rank; 5 Clones. S/SS Rank; 6 Clones. 4 round cool down.
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    Name: Kawarimi No Jutsu
    Rank: E
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Element: -
    Range: 50 ft.
    Description: One round charge up rather than hand seals; Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object, this object must be something like a log or stone roughly the same size as the user. The size doesn't have to be exactly the same as the user but what this means is a person can't replace themselves with a leaf or a twig, nor could they replace themselves with a giant boulder, if questions arise over uses of this technique contact an admin but any decision they make is final. In addition this can not be another person unless that person is willing. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack. These objects or other people must be within 50 feet of the user when the technique is performed. There is a 5 round cool down between uses of this technique and it can only be used a maximum of 3 times per topic.
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    Name: Henge No Jutsu
    Rank: E
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Element: -
    Range: -
    Description: Hand Seals; Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents. However, while transformed only the user's shape and appearance changes. Meaning that if say the host turns themselves into a sword they won't be able to cut anything unless their body could do so naturally. This technique lasts for 4 posts with a cooldown of 2.
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    Name: Drakon enhansā
    Rank: B
    Element: N/A
    Type:Taijutsu
    Range:Self
    Description: The user charges chakra throughout their bodies causing enhanced physical reaction time{1 post charge}. Once charging is complete the user will released said charged chakra throughout their body causing the body to enhance itself via better reflexes and reaction time up to x2.5. It last up to 4 post with a 5 post cooldown.
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    Name: Rasengan
    Canon/Custom: Canon
    Rank: A
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Element: N/A
    Distance: Touch
    Description: Minimum Chunin to use. The user channels an extreme amount of chakra into their palm, so much in fact that it takes on physical form and will explode in the hand before forming into its needed spherical form, for this reason a hightened understanding of chakra control is needed to use this so only people with ninjutsu as either their secondary or primary specialization are able to use this. When the technique is activated the user has two chances to hit their opponent, one in the post it is activated and one the round directly after, however if you miss the first time and have to use your second shot the power is considerably lower. If you land a hit the first time the rasengan dissipates and the second shot is unusable.

    To actually begin the technique itself there are two ways, which way you use depends on your power level (rank). Chunin and Special Jounin require the use of a clone (any clone besides the basic E rank) to help them maintain chakra control and rotation, they must use the clone to continually spin the chakra for the time they need to use an A rank jutsu into their palm. For Jounin, S ranks and SS ranks the hand seals are able to be skipped due to their higher understanding of chakra control, they are only required to charge and rotate chakra into their palm for the same time it takes them to use an A rank jutsu.

    First Strike After the activation of the technique the user charges forward and thrusts the technique into their opponent, the force power of the rasengan is enough to cut trough any material with ease. When the technique hits the opponent the the inital entrance wound is not to bad, barely a scratch, however it then rotates and expands out like buckshot. This results In a funnel like wound when if the intial strike was a three inch hole in the stomach it would gradually grow larger until the exit wound which would destroy the majority of the opponent's back side. This level of damage will normally kill someone within one to two posts. After the attack lands the user is thrown back from the recoil a minimum of forty yards through the air.

    Second Strike Exactly like the first strike the user charges towards their intended target and thrusts their hand into the opponent. The second strike is made possible however by using stretching the energy that covers the sphere like a shell very thin, thus the power is considerably lower on the second chance. The loss of power makes it so the technique does not go all the way through an opponent, they are only able to make an attack deep enough to go in and expand about three inches in every direction. The damage inside does not destroy organs or tissue but simply ruptures and tears a bit. There will be serious internal bleeding resulting however.

    This technique has a major drawback, however. The chakra drain and stress on the body make it so this technique is only able to be used once per week. However if someone is doing a large amount of in character battle they are able to recharge it through sheer will, for every three IC battles you are a part of in the cool down of the original use you are able to use rasengan once more, it can be recharged a maximum of three times in a week, an attempted start of a fourth will cause the user's body to completely shut down and kill them.







W E A P O N



    Name: Haitan
    Rank: S
    Fused Element: N/A
    Description: This blade is located in the midst of the spiritual mountain, Unknown to out siders. This blade is said to have been around since the creation of the mountain itself. This blade is hand forged with carbon steel, and engraved with ancient symbols. This blade has a metal guard, metal handle wrapped in black cotton. The pudao known as , Haiten has the ability to use its users chakra and turn it into black chakra, to use its techniques, this chakra doesn't cause harm to the wielder. Other techniques besides the ones already mentioned can be used by obtaining Haiten scrolls and learning Haiten Jutsus.
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    Origin: This blade was said to have been created by both The Lord of The Sky, Raican and The Lord of Dark Arts, Andeias. Although rumors and speculations say that this is a weapon made by gods, there is no true history of how this weapon came to be.



[SC] TRAITS.

Diplomat - 3. Master. A true man who can advise daimyos, lead armies, and increase the morale of your comrades when death seems to right around the corner. You had learn from past mistakes and know full and well what to say and what not to say. You are the person they send into the middle of a civil war without fear of you dying, because the war will end in a day then

Blacksmith - 1. The Apprentice Through some basic training either by sight alone or through a blacksmith, you are beginning to put two and two together to create items and weapons for yourself. You have the basic of knowledge, making small items, mostly nails and barrel stock. This is because you are un familar with some of the substances that allows you to create better material. Only through time and patience will you succeed towards the next step

Reader - 1. The Mind Reader: You are beginning to understand the psychology of intrapersonal (social) people and you are able to read through many of the basics of lies and through basic mental walls that people put up. It's only the beginning and you are swiftly able to learn peoples lies and walls




N O T . F O R G O T T E N


"Dad. You grew up with them, right? Mind telling me their story?"

    Birth Date: Winter, 25th of the 12th month
    Home Village/Current: Hyozangakure
    Parents: Mother - Tana Doragonhato (Deceased)/ Father - Raz Doragonhato {Alive}
    Siblings: N/A
    Sensei / Role Model: N/A
    History: The DNA Decedent of the First Doragonhato
    Nami was born on December 25th or Christmas as it know for. Nami was underestimated child or so he was labeled by not only the village but by his own father as well. Being the son of Tana, the first female Dorgonhato clan leader high expectations were to be meet even at birth. Being smothered by his mother always put Nami at ease though so growing up wasn't to bad. Nami had to learn fast that there would be many challenges placed before him and he would have to over come them all. At age 10 he was to fight his father in an all out dual, Nami was over powered easily. His father always seemingly looked down upon Nami, his own flesh and blood and now Nami had enough.

    The Rise to Power begins
    Nami entered the academy a little later then the other kids but progressed through his courses all the same. Nami easily was given the rank genin at age 11 and assigned a squad. Nami enjoyed the time spent with his squad then he did at home. Nami now of age 15 challenged his father to another dual, right before he was to enter the chuunin exams. The battle was fast paced and heart pumping, Nami matched his father speed now and parried his attack blow for blow. As the decicive ending came about, Nami stood tall over his father. The battle was hard fought and worth the rewards that came after, and now Nami faced his next challenge, the chuunin exams. The challenge wasn't far down the road a came up upon Nami and his family all too soon but none the less he would enter. The first few rounds were easy enough as he and his team over came them, but once the team was to be separated Nami knew the challenge was only just beginning. Nami barely got by his opponents and yet he was in the finals against a fairly powerful looking opponent, In the end Nami was to lose this battle. This did not affect Nami at all he had already planned preparations for the next chuunin exams but they would not be needed. Nami even though defeated was deemed chuunin by the proctors of the exams. Nami could hardly believe it himself but now that he had achieved that it was now time to set himself up for the next level.

    The Heir Claims his Throne
    Nami had progressed far in the years that have passed becoming Jounin was a big leap for him but now there was an even greater leap ahead. With the death of his mother creeping up upon the clan there would have to be a new leader and through birth rites Nami was to be that leader. Nami knew of the impending role ahead but didn't know if he could over come the obstacles that were to be thrown his way. As his mother passed Nami didn't accept the leader position as everyone thought he would, instead he had given it to his father explaining to everyone that he was not yet ready. It took time for Nami to finally over come the death of his mother A year in fact bringing him to the age of 18 and with that brought new insight on who he was and what he was born to be. Returning to his village he would stand before everyone and openly declare that he would now be taking back the throne as the leader of the Doragonhāto and no one would stand his path. His father whom had seemingly disregarded even the thought of Nami being his son nodded his approval and stepped down without a second thought. Nami now being in charge has promised not to fall short of everyone's expectations. The clan has many hardships and now have found their way to a new home and are now thriving as a clan and a family. And so now we continue the story threw the eyes of the young Doragonhāto as he pursues his goals.....


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PostSubject: Re: Tizen Doragonhato   Sat Jun 23, 2012 8:34 am

can i recommend that you change villages please cause of the ICe village of been very over popluar and the other villages are not getting all that much attention and also your clan can you please resister it in the clan section first

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PostSubject: Re: Tizen Doragonhato   Sat Jun 23, 2012 10:32 am

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PostSubject: Re: Tizen Doragonhato   Wed Jun 27, 2012 10:03 am

Jutsu Name: Raiton: False Darkness Spear
Rank: B
Element: Raiton
Range: 17 feet
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: The user emits lighting from there hand and forms it into a spear. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies. The spear is 6 ft in length and when thrown caan travel at a max speed of 28 mph. If the spear makes contact with its target the area hit will begin to go numb and wont be usuable for 4 posts. Once thrown the spear can not be directed unless the user catches it and throws it into another direction. The spear can split into 3 different spears each time used has a cooldown of 6 posts.


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for your weapon needs to be S rank and the black chakra part need explaining more of what it does exactly fro the jutsu underneath it looks like black lightning which is a limited ability which is not allowed as you have rasengan

also add in your clan jutsu please

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PostSubject: Re: Tizen Doragonhato   Wed Jun 27, 2012 10:18 am

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Made it S~Rank, The black Chakra  does nothing it's just for show

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The name "black lightning" has nothing to do with the limited jutsu as the jutsu has no elemental affinity it's just a name because the blade makes your chakra black.

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PostSubject: Re: Tizen Doragonhato   Wed Jun 27, 2012 10:32 am

Name: Rush of The Black Lightning
Rank: A
Element: ---
Type:Weapon
Range: Close
Description: By sending any kind of chakra throughout the symbols of the weapon, Haiten will convert your chakra into black chakra that surges throughout your body and increase the user’s speed to approximately +80 mph. This move also makes the user nearly immune to raiton element attack for 6 posts. The wielder if hit directly with a B ranked raiton attacks directly will only deal 20% less damage to the user, raiton techs lower than B rank will only deal 40% less damage to the weilder if hit directly. Any raiton attacks passed B rank will deal only 10% less damage to the wielder at A rank and will feel the full extent of the raiton attack at S rank. The speed and near immunity only lasts for 6 posts once this move is activated. It will take 3 posts to reactivate the immunity and speed from this technique.


Jutsu Name: Ultimate Flash Mode
Rank: A
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Type: Supplementary
Description: Upon a one post charge of chakra throughout the body, followed by a single handseal, the user explodes with a neon color of their aura. The hair also glows a bright neon color while in this mode, signifying perfect mastery of this jutsu. While in this mode, the user stimulates the body with chakra to deliver a 110% increase in their overall speed, reaction time, and reflexes.(As shown in the video game.) The only jutsu comparable are the Eight Gates, which can eventually surpass this, and the Raiton Armor, which is slightly below this. The downside to this is, exhaustion sets in immediately following the use, if used for the full term of the duration. All other enhancements from other Ninjutsu negate while this mode is active and tunnel vision, along with half of the normal hearing set in.(Meaning no complex math) The user, while in this mode, can only perform one single ninjutsu. This jutsu lasts for 7 posts, but with an extra 10 chakra per round, can last up to 10, which would total 70 chakra, either at the beginning, or per round after the seven post original. Can be used twice per topic, 10 post cooldown.

this is a no as well raiton armour is below this I dont think so. The increases are way too high and would have to be S rank. also considering you have two ranks already you wouldn't beable to have another

By sending any kind of chakra throughout the symbols of the weapon, Haiten will convert your chakra into black chakra that surges throughout your body and increase the user’s speed to approximately +80 mph

this part of the jutsu does it absorb chakra the writing sugests that it does. The speed is too fast 30 mph top speed.

Also how will this jutsu give you immunity to raiton element as the jutsu is not of raiton element and makes no sence for you to have full immunity for so many posts reminds me a mini Lightning release armour which is a no.




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PostSubject: Re: Tizen Doragonhato   Wed Jun 27, 2012 10:38 am

Ultimate flash mode:
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Well what if I decrease the augmentations that would make it suited to be A rank would that be alright?
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I will wait for your discussion with Aiden I supppose

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PostSubject: Re: Tizen Doragonhato   Wed Jun 27, 2012 4:09 pm

Sorry to double post but Edited

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PostSubject: Re: Tizen Doragonhato   Wed Jun 27, 2012 7:11 pm

Name; Chakra enhanced strength
Rank: C
Type: NInjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Contact
Description: This is a technique where the user focuses chakra into their hands and feet using precise chakra control and releases it with pinpoint timing, which greatly enhances their strength giving the user enough strength to easily make gigantic craters


remove this it is an limited ability good try though and is not C rank S rank more like but forget that and remove this

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PostSubject: Re: Tizen Doragonhato   Wed Jun 27, 2012 7:26 pm

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Hahaha Should have known, Removed madam

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PostSubject: Re: Tizen Doragonhato   Thu Jun 28, 2012 8:29 am

Name: Cielo Batallón(Sky Battalion)
Rank: B
Range: Close
Element: Fuuton
Type: Ninjutsu/ Taijutsu
Description: This is a technique created by Tizen in the honor of his village. This technique causes the user’s body to serve as a wind conductor for one whole post. This causes everything in a 5 meter radius to be blown back, and when this move is complete, the immense winds begin to manifest itself around the user’s body in the form of a white chakra coat which will cover the user from head to toe. This coating gives the user a Ninjutsu and Taijutsu advantage by increasing the force of impact and speed of the user by 4x his/her normal capabilities. This gives the user a Ninjutsu advantage by absorbing 5% damage done by Ninjutsu and also allows the user to compress chakra from the coating into a palm sized ball that can be shot out up to 5 meters, to hit an opponent with great force,blowing them back and causing damage. This coating lasts 8 posts and requires one post charge up.This technique requires a 3 post cool down after every use.The user must possess the attribute of wind.


remove all the increases in stuff I told you about this in the chat box yesterday 4* is a no. also remove the damage reduction.

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PostSubject: Re: Tizen Doragonhato   Thu Jun 28, 2012 8:33 am

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Removed Cielo Battalion all together

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PostSubject: Re: Tizen Doragonhato   Thu Jun 28, 2012 9:33 am

APPROVED 1/2


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PostSubject: Re: Tizen Doragonhato   Thu Jun 28, 2012 9:59 am

2/2

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