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All have been laid to rest, all expect memories. Throughout the years, shinobi - men and women - have learned how to preserve the memories of thousand of great shinobi that have lived, and then have passed. Though, they never managed to gain the memories of Uzumaki Naruto, Haruno Sakura, and Uchiha Sasuke. These three ninjas are wildly known as the Three Heroes of the world. They are the mirror images of their legendary Sannin teachers, and touched everyone's life in some sort of way. Their memory though has been scattered across the world, and the pieces of their chakra find themselves locked away in certain men and women, wildly known as the Kages of today. They are the shadows and guardians of today's new era, and they seem to wait for something to happen. They await for Madara Uchiha to return, the Fourth Shinobi War had been created by none ever than Obito Uchiha, Kakashi's old friend whom he thought had died. In this war, numerous men and women died trying to protect all that they thought was right and true, in the end - Naruto, Sakura and Sasuke had perished by giving up their lives to kill Madara and Obito Uchiha. Their chakra awoken a sleeping God, whom took the combined power of the ten bijuu, kurama and the eight tailed bijuu's life source and basically recreated life anew. These memories however, are gone, and cannot be recreated or found in any memory book, or even in text. This story is being told through the combined chakra fragments of the Legendary Heroes that each Kage takes upon their death and inserts into a crystal fragment. However, life as everyone now knows, is finally changing. Kazengakure and Hyozangakure had finally came to an agreement of forming a grand alliance between their villages, rumored that they were related by distant cousins, this alliance would be greater than any had ever seen. The day of the treaty being signed, and thus the festival on the island of Heiwa, a new danger had awaken that day. The Sage of Six Paths was unable to keep a dark entity in slumber from the grave and beyond; a new five tailed bijuu - the Hydra - had awoken. In a fit of rage and unknown, the Hydra destroyed half of the festival grounds, killing more than five thousand civilians and shinobi alike. The Bijuu set it's eyes on the building where the witnessing six kages were located, and destroyed the entire building. Three months had passed, and Sannins of each village filled the spots of the Kages, as many hoped that one day there would be news that someone had survived the attack. Only the Hyozangakure's kage had returned, apparently unaware of what happened. Because of this, many of the villages have returned hostile towards each other, many blaming Hyozengakure for the attack that killed each of the Kage's. Slowly, men and women of each village are elected to fill the Kage spots of each of the village, alliances are being forged and mended. But can anyone form a great alliance to take down Hydria, and once again, scatter all of the tailed beasts across the world?

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PostSubject: Touketsu Clan   Touketsu Clan Icon_minitimeMon May 21, 2012 8:48 pm

"Grandpa, you were part of a great family - right?"

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Touketsu

Touketsu Clan Shuungalogo
Name: Touketsu

Location: The main location of the Touketsu clan lies hidden in territories of the Land of Ice. Nonetheless, many ninjas from the Touketsu clan have transferred for more social living to Hyozan no Gakure.

Type:
* Ninjutsu
* Taijutsu
* Genjutsu - Very little abilities can do this -

Bloodline: Ice Release (Hyōton) is the blood inheritance limit of the Touketsu Clan. This unique Ice style is formed through the simultaneous usage of the Water and Wind elemental styles.

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Clan Jutsu[s]:
Name: Hakaku Shunshin
Subname: Advanced Body Flicker
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: A variation of the normal body flicker, this jutsu has been more refined by the clan to allow many more uses then the standard technique, the specialty of this jutsu is that it allows the clan members to almost teleport between nearby patches of water, or the special mirrors of the clan, the maximum range of this style is only about twenty feet however. The amount of times this can be used, while in the mirrors, is four times before another E ranked amount of chakra is used, while outside of the mirrors the effects lesson and it performs like a normal body flicker except it will need nearby patches of water or shards of the clans ice large enough to be able to hide the body in (roughly around a two feet by one foot pane of glass like ice)

Name: Mizu Retsu
Subname: Ice water.
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Hyōton
Description: Convert each Kage Bushin, Bushin of any kind into ice, completely destroying the clones.

Name: Senbon De Aisu
Subname: Ice Needles
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Hyoton
Description: With the mouth and fingers senbu needles are formed with the blowing of the breath, the ninja then throws needles and hits the enemy this technique can hit the muscular nerves.

Name: Gosuku-Koori
Subname: Ice Armor
Rank: D-C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Hyoton
Description: Creating a shield or armor of ice for any part of the body, the ninja can appear the armor with moisture in the air, leaving a coat of ice, that defends attacks, then if destroyed or weakened, disintegrates in to water.

Name: kourimizu
Subname: Shaved ice
Rank: D-C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Hyoton
Description: Paralyzes the enemy, it makes the enemy extremely slow from the cold, the enemies muscles are so paralyzed that it causes the opponent to continue attacking with the same speed.

Name: Mizu no Muchi.
Subname: Water Whip
Rank: D-C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: This whip serves both to attack and immobilize opponents. It also has the quality of electric shocks that can throw and knock who are trapped in this technique because when wet, it makes it more vulnerable to electricity.

Name: Shimo Nobia
Subname: Freezing Point
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Hyoton
Description: freezes the joints and points of the body, the enemy vital points frees with ice causing the effected to slow down and numb down, until he reheats himself.

Name: Kyouhakuzai
Subname: Intimidation
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Description: Intimidation is a one turn genjutsu stun, Delivered through a strong show of presence like a stare down or a roar or even a show of strength.

Name: Kirigakure no Jutsu.
Subname: Fog of the waters
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: This technique involves the battlefield in a dense fog prevents visibility. This technique does not avoid it or escape the Kawarimi, but both the Sharingan and the Byakugan can penetrate with ease.

Name: Utsusemi no Jutsu
Subname: projectile Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Description: This technique allows you to make your voice seem as if it would be somewhere else, without giving out the ninjas position it makes you appearance as if having a multidirectional voice.

Name: Nipou Kirigakure No Jutsu
Subname: Fog Abyss
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Hyoton
Description: The ninja creates a dark, the thick fog that leaves the enemy blind to everything around him, only the Byakugan can see through the thick fog.
Name: Furi-Zu Shikakejirai
Subname: Ice Trap
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: An interesting technique in which the user of the Touketsu clan will manipulate water to trap a target in much the same way they themselves are able to enter ice, the effect however will be one that the opponent cannot leave the ice if they lack the ability of the clan. This is done whenever a target comes into extended contact with the ice, allowing the user to almost pull them into the ice with the chakra already part of the existing forms of clan like ice. This takes roughly a post to be possible and the user won't be able to cast the next part of this technique until their next post.

Rank: C-B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: The user, along with their Bunshins Mizu, perform a number of strokes forming a team attack. This technique spends a users action, and the action is to turn each participating MizuBunshin. This technique can be done in the same turn to be called the mizubunshins, including although these actions are not in the first round you are needed to concentrate and have many mizu bushins in the area. Requires Mizubunshin no Jutsu.

Name: Gosuiwan no Jutsu
Subname: Technique of increased tension
Rank: C-B
Type: Taijutsu
Description: This technique does increase muscle mass arms to increase physical strength.

Name: Suika no Jutsu
Subname: human dilution technique
Rank: C-B
Type: Taijutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Using this technique the shinobi is able to transform into water (keeping the body shape), which gives it great resistance to the blows, but very weak to the element Raiton.

Name: Kiri no Shokyo
Subname: Technical illusory fog Extender
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Hyoton
Description: The ninja performs fog seals to extend previously created fog. Requires the Jutsu of fog, which doubles the stay of the fog. Such a fog can be called a Genjutsu do to its appearance of fog remaining.

Name: Suirou no Jutsu
Subname: Technique of hydro-prison
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: This technique creates a water bubble around the enemy as a in prison, then reinforcing the bubble with a Ice capsule so that the enemy cannot leave and every moment that passes is less air in the lungs until they die of drowning.

Name: Kiri no endan Shokyo
Subname: Technical illusory fog Final Extender
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Description:
The ninja made stamps, spending a large amount of chakra, to extend the previously created fog for even longer. This technique is a Genjutsu, which requires that the fog is active in any Jutsu, this will make the fog lasts four times as long.

Name: Kiri no Kaihi
Subname: Avoidance fog.
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Hyoton
Description: The dense fog produces slurred rivals, making it difficult to success, being the master of murder as fluid as the gas that makes up the fog, the ninja is capable of running strikes to the confused enemy.

Name: Dou-koori-jun
Subname: Conversion of the body on ice
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Hyoton
Description: The Ninja can either their own body, or their opponent’s body into armor of ice. This will in effects increase physical strength; nonetheless speed will be greatly reduced.
WARNING: Frostbite can occur if not done to a Touketsu, or Ice user.

Name: Sensatsu Suishou
Subname: Thousand needles of ice
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Hyoton
Description: With your strength and chakra you beam a fall and shower of needles of ice to go over your opponent.

Name: Aisu Tsubasa
Subname: ice wings
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Hyoton
Description: The ninja concentrating his chakra can convert wind into ice and combined with water which is attached to its back creating a large Ice Wing that will give you speed. Its effect lasts the entire battle. The wings are not immortal and if skills are used they can be destroyed by fire or hard attacks, when using the wings you are more affected by electrical attacks.

Name: Hi-Uindo-Gogyou Ninpu
Subname: Wind Water Ice
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Hyoton
Description: Avalanche of Air water and ice. Merging water, wind a huge amount of ice, creating an avalanche. You need to dominate with almost perfection the wind and water elements to do his jutsu.

Name: Makyo; Hyoton; Satsu
Subname: Demonic Mirror Ice Murder
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Hyuton
Description: The continuation from the Ice Trap jutsu, the user will force the chakra in the ice trap to explode outwards, shattering the form of ice in such a way that it would be fatal, the user can also use this technique to explode the mirror they themselves are in while escaping with the clans specialized body flicker. The second effect would cause shards of ice to explode in the same manner, and both forms can potentially be deadly to any nearby victims.

Name: Hyoukai Kasui
Subname: Ice Spikes
Rank: - B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Hyuton
Description: The user unleashes giant spikes made of ice in such a quick way that most shinobi would find it very difficult to react in time, covering an area around twenty feet, the spikes are so hard and sharp that they can easily pierce the human body, other objects, such as shields or armor, would be penetrated based on rank in reference to the strength of the shinobi.

Name: Atari Mizu Bushin
Subname: Hits of water clones

Name: Kiri no Omoi
Subname: Heavy Fog.
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Hyoton
Description: It creates an environment with higher than normal gravity in the heads of the two ninjas; such is the pressure that it may even cause the enemy to suffer a fatigue by virtue of being subject to it. This technique is functional to Kirigakure no Jutsu.

Name: Naguru Bai
Subname: Dual Strike
Rank: A
Type: Taijutsu
Description: Critical hits strikes pounding on the vital points bare hand or weapons to subtle and small, as kunais or needles.

Name: Muon Satsujin no Jutsu
Subname: Technical silent assassination
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: Technique of murder in which the enemy has difficulty to detect the presence of the attacker.

Name: Atto not Suru Yu
Subname: Agitation of the mist
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu
Description: When there is fog, the user harasses the target causing panic with fears of the target into thinking he is inferior and will die.

Name: Touketsu Kagemusha/Gachigachi
Subname: Frozen Shadow Warrior/Frozen Solid
Rank: A
Type: Taijutsu/Self-Genjutsu
Description: This ability is meant to be a form of resistance to damage. Their high levels of training and mental focus allow them to move through a war torn battlefield as if they were marching through a sunny, open field. They are not invulnerable to damage, but they can "ignore" pain and are generally too focused for genjutsu to be easily used on them.
WARNING: When this Self-Genjutsu is used it causes the individual to go slightly mad, in other words they will not react to severe damage, which could place their lives in danger.

Name: Makyou Hyoushou
Subname: Demonic Ice Crystal Mirrors
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Hyoton
Description: The Ninja can create a dome of twenty-one mirrors made out of ice to trap an opponent. Twelve remain at ground level, eight are placed above the first twelve and angled toward the ground, and the final mirror is above the rest and facing the ground. The ninja can then enter one of the mirrors and instantly transport to another mirror. While moving about the bombards the opponent with attacks at very high speeds, such that the rest of the world would appear to be moving in slow motion compared to him. If the mirror ninja is in is broken, he can leap out of one of the fragments and continue his attack or move to another mirror. The technique requires a large amount of chakra to maintain, so the ninja's movement becomes progressively slower the longer he maintains the mirrors. Though they are made from ice, the mirrors are imbued with enough chakra to resist fire almost completely.

Name: Saewataru Tora
Subname: Ice Tiger
Rank: C-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: After forming many hand signs, the user will create a tiger like form of ice which can be manipulated to hit targets to cause damage, extended contact of this tiger can allow the user to further freeze anything it touches by expanding the clan's ice like water out the mouth and cover a target. This is not a summon, and the chakra holding it together will release of the user can not maintain the last hand sign, which is the one for tiger, the concentration required to use this technique is such that the user cannot move or the form of ice will disperse, almost as if it is melting.

Name: Sensatsu Suishou
Subname: Thousand Needles of Death
Rank: E-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Hyoton
Description: Using only a single hand to form and hold a hand seal, the user creates the needles, The user will kick water into the air, and use their kekkei kenkai combined with small spurts of chakra to make needles fly at the opponent from the water that is now air born, the amount of needles created is based on rank. These needles then come raining down on the target, and are individually aimed but cannot be controlled after sent. The amount for each rank is, five at E rank, twenty at D rank, one-hundred at C rank, two hundred fifty at B rank, five hundred at A rank and finally one thousand at S rank, although the user can decided to stop this jutsu at any time, the time in which it takes to form the needles is almost instant between each needle, giving the effect that this jutsu will create many at once, which in turn will shower the target very effectively.


Clan History:

The Touketsu, "The Frozen". The very name that binds these shinobi stems from their focused, calculating demeanor in battle and the chilling ice waters where their skills are honed. Dating back before the rise of the Hyozangakure itself, they enjoyed being the central power in the Land of Ice with many of their organization earning the most elite positions in the worlds military forces. However as time progressed less and less children were born. Perhaps it was their curse of seeming ghostly, as many looked like twenty and were actually eighty. Some said it was their blood becoming intoxicated with the world, as a Touketsu born is cursed to freeze their body, in other words every liquid in their body is like a frozen river, causing their skin to go slightly pale, skin tough yet soothing and age mostly unknown. This was the main reason of their military down fall. So of course, it was no surprise that the result of their replacement as the favored sons and daughters of the Land of Ice was imminent. Nonetheless the Touketsu clan still holds the name as best “Hunting-Nin”.

The devotion these individuals have displayed for their nation and the value they place on intelligence and subtlety reaches near inhuman levels. Casual hearsay mentions handfuls of these ninja still out on missions that were given before their downfall. These now ancient soldiers from a bygone era are, in a sense, the living history of Land of Ice whom are revered as paragons of the Touketsu ideals.

Now only to two lines exist within the Touketsu, one is a direct bloodline of few sick, and feeble members, those who some times do not even survive past the age of ten, and the indirect branch family which is created out of outsiders. In other words no true bloodline links all of their members together, no shared family name, no exact kekkai genkai to call their own. It is for that very reason the Touketsu have more in common with a guild than a clan. A once frequently told bedtime story, used as a means to frighten children into behaving, tells of these frozen shinobi spiriting away naughty boys and girls in the dead of night to use as fresh training subjects and in the worst cases as training dummies. In actuality future Touketsu are composed of a blend of pure bloods and clanless families, and of course, the frequently made orphans who are taken in off the streets.

There are three known stipulations for becoming a Touketsu, the first is being born into the clan by an actual blood member. This means no ritual is required to make the child officially a Touketsu. One who is born from the clan can either be mixed with a branch family member, or a pure breed. On rare occasions pure bloods will mate with none branch members, but usually the child will die at birth. The second way of becoming a Touketsu is not belonging to a clan. Be it small or large, none with the bloodline of others shall be allowed entry amongst their ranks. This decree serves several purposes as both a means to protect their own techniques from spreading as well as acting as a preventive measure to avoiding political feuds with other clans over obtaining their bloodline secrets. It is also been speculated this has been kept in place to keep those of the Hyozangakure clans (and others at that) from 'infesting' their proud ranks and using the organization for their own motives.
The third requirement is a rigorous mental and physical conditioning regiment that all members must endure for several years before indoctrination into their exclusive echelon. In addition to the severe discipline and drilling each day, they also receive a strict diet supplemented by herbal, chemical, and chakra concoctions created to improve muscle memory capabilities and reflexes while enhancing cognitive functions through 'rewiring'. It is important that this begins before puberty as all drug induced beneficial alterations to the initiates become permanent as they reach adolescence. Completion of this crucible and learning to harness their natural elemental affinity are required before enrollment into the village academy is permitted by the most senior members. However it is not unheard of for a trainee to enter the academy simply for the graduation exam.
Touketsu tend to be excellent in several fields rather than having complete mastery over one in particular, a result of the importance placed on each of the ninja arts and how severely neglecting any of the three will ultimately lead to defeat. Due to this 'programing' the typical Touketsu is quite versatility, using everything from traditional weaponry (though they generally tend to favor thick slashing blades) to a wide variety of jutsus that seem to have no real bias towards element nor type. Albeit unable to copy jutsu instantaneously like the Uchiha, the Touketsu are cunningly resourceful and often pick up on many techniques during their long missions or fights against enemy armies much to the horror of those on the receiving end.

IMPORTANT Additional Information:

BASIC INFORMATION:
Specifications to becoming a Touketsu Member:
1. Having at least one parent as a pure bloodline member.
2. If you were born 1/3 Touketsu, or have two parents from the Branch family your Clan Leader (Default in your story) will convert you into a Branch family member 6 months after your birth with the Blood Clot Manipulation.
3. If you were adopted into the Touketsu family, you must have been no older then 10 to be adopted, as the Blood Clot Manipulation does not work for individuals who have not gone through vigorous training before hitting puberty.
* If you have already hit puberty you cannot join this clan.

The Secrete Jutsu.
Name: Gyouketsu Ayatsuru
Subname: Blood Clot Manipulation
Rank: S [Forbidden] – CANNOT BE LEARNED BY USERS
Element: Hyoton
Description: Blood Clut Manipulation is the hidden Touketsu technique which allows none bloodline members to join the Touketus Clan. This jutsu is specifically meant for the use of children under the age of ten. The technique itself is something never taught, unless they are head of the family.

What the technique does: The technique itself converts any none Touketsu into a honorary member. The Jutsu allows any who have been baptized with Blood Clot Manipulation to use the Touketsu Blood line jutsus.

Important Notes about this technique:
Members who are either half blooded, or full-blooded Touketsus do not have to go through this technique. Nonetheless 1/3 Touketsu bloodline members must take the technique upon their body. This also includes any adopted children or children of two Branch Family Touketsus. Being converted into a Touketsu, does not make you a Pure Blood.

Physical Characteristics:
An important thing to note about the Touketsu clan is that every Touketsu bloodline member is born with silver, white or blue hair. Adopted members can have any kind of hair color; nonetheless if they marry a bloodline member, the possibility of the child having the characterized Touketsu hair is very possible.

Another interesting physical characteristic of the Touketsu clan is their extreme pale and white skin. This is due to the blood clots of ice within their entire body, which allows them not to age as fast as other people within the world.

Special Abilities/Drawbacks:
1. Do not age as fast as others.
2. If one were born as a full blood member, they could hit the bucket any moment.
3. Adopted, or half bloods have the possibility of living longer, without suffering the danger of dying any moment.
4. The Touketsu Clan has been known for their capacity to use one hand for a jutsu, instead of the usual two. This is because their concentration is so superb that they only need to do limited amounts of motion to create the desired jutsu.


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PostSubject: Re: Touketsu Clan   Touketsu Clan Icon_minitimeMon May 21, 2012 9:06 pm

Ice Release is already a clan on here.
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PostSubject: Re: Touketsu Clan   Touketsu Clan Icon_minitimeMon May 21, 2012 9:10 pm

I do believe there are many Clans in the Cannon world that have "similar" Elements. Nonetheless, that doesn't mean they are "Identical" nor does it mean they are the same.

I don't think it would make much sense to say there can only be one Ice Release clan. Just like I in my story stated, there can and is more then one clan who uses Ice release.

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PostSubject: Re: Touketsu Clan   Touketsu Clan Icon_minitimeMon May 21, 2012 9:33 pm

Name: Mizu Retsu
Subname: Ice water.
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Hyōton
Description: Convert each Kage Bushin, Bushin of any kind into ice, completely destroying the clones.
Yea.....able to stop any kage bushin at D rank. Not happening, WAY to low of a rank, and im not even sure if this should be allowed.

Name: Hakaku Shunshin
Subname: Advanced Body Flicker
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: A variation of the normal body flicker, this jutsu has been more refined by the clan to allow many more uses then the standard technique, the specialty of this jutsu is that it allows the clan members to almost teleport between nearby patches of water, or the special mirrors of the clan, the maximum range of this style is only about twenty feet however. The amount of times this can be used, while in the mirrors, is four times before another E ranked amount of chakra is used, while outside of the mirrors the effects lesson and it performs like a normal body flicker except it will need nearby patches of water or shards of the clans ice large enough to be able to hide the body in (roughly around a two feet by one foot pane of glass like ice)
Considering the fact that body flicker is D, the fact that you think an ADVANCED flicker would be a lower rank then flicker is funny.

Name: Gosuku-Koori
Subname: Ice Armor
Rank: D-C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Hyoton
Description: Creating a shield or armor of ice for any part of the body, the ninja can appear the armor with moisture in the air, leaving a coat of ice, that defends attacks, then if destroyed or weakened, disintegrates in to water.
Need weaknesses for me to even consider having it be a C rank

Name: Mizu no Muchi.
Subname: Water Whip
Rank: D-C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: This whip serves both to attack and immobilize opponents. It also has the quality of electric shocks that can throw and knock who are trapped in this technique because when wet, it makes it more vulnerable to electricity.
This is a basic water jutsu, which is of B rank

Name: Shimo Nobia
Subname: Freezing Point
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Hyoton
Description: freezes the joints and points of the body, the enemy vital points frees with ice causing the effected to slow down and numb down, until he reheats himself.
Higher rank, ATLEAST B, unless you add weaknesses A

Name: Kyouhakuzai
Subname: Intimidation
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Description: Intimidation is a one turn genjutsu stun, Delivered through a strong show of presence like a stare down or a roar or even a show of strength.
This seems very similar to me to Killing Intent which is banned here.


Name: Kirigakure no Jutsu.
Subname: Fog of the waters
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: This technique involves the battlefield in a dense fog prevents visibility. This technique does not avoid it or escape the Kawarimi, but both the Sharingan and the Byakugan can penetrate with ease.
This is almost the same exact thing as the Hidden Mist jutsu, except weaker since it sharigan/byakugan can't see through hidden mist. Denied

Name: Utsusemi no Jutsu
Subname: projectile Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Description: This technique allows you to make your voice seem as if it would be somewhere else, without giving out the ninjas position it makes you appearance as if having a multidirectional voice.
What does this even have to deal with your clan? Remove it.

Name: Nipou Kirigakure No Jutsu
Subname: Fog Abyss
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Hyoton
Description: The ninja creates a dark, the thick fog that leaves the enemy blind to everything around him, only the Byakugan can see through the thick fog.
As with voice projection, this has nothing to deal with your clan, plus again, this is like hidden mist, yet weaker. Nope


Name: Furi-Zu Shikakejirai
Subname: Ice Trap
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: An interesting technique in which the user of the Touketsu clan will manipulate water to trap a target in much the same way they themselves are able to enter ice, the effect however will be one that the opponent cannot leave the ice if they lack the ability of the clan. This is done whenever a target comes into extended contact with the ice, allowing the user to almost pull them into the ice with the chakra already part of the existing forms of clan like ice. This takes roughly a post to be possible and the user won't be able to cast the next part of this technique until their next post.
This is basically a more op version of Demon Ice Mirrors, which is a limited on here, denied.

Rank: C-B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: The user, along with their Bunshins Mizu, perform a number of strokes forming a team attack. This technique spends a users action, and the action is to turn each participating MizuBunshin. This technique can be done in the same turn to be called the mizubunshins, including although these actions are not in the first round you are needed to concentrate and have many mizu bushins in the area. Requires Mizubunshin no Jutsu.
1. Name, and 2. Im not even sure what it does.

Name: Gosuiwan no Jutsu
Subname: Technique of increased tension
Rank: C-B
Type: Taijutsu
Description: This technique does increase muscle mass arms to increase physical strength.
Denied for sure unless you explain how. There are a lot of existing jutsu's, most on the limited list, that does this. I do not want this used as a way to circumnavigate that rule.

Name: Suika no Jutsu
Subname: human dilution technique
Rank: C-B
Type: Taijutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Using this technique the shinobi is able to transform into water (keeping the body shape), which gives it great resistance to the blows, but very weak to the element Raiton.
This is a limited that exists already on here. Denied

Name: Kiri no Shokyo
Subname: Technical illusory fog Extender
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Hyoton
Description: The ninja performs fog seals to extend previously created fog. Requires the Jutsu of fog, which doubles the stay of the fog. Such a fog can be called a Genjutsu do to its appearance of fog remaining.
Makes no sense as to how this is related to Ice

Name: Suirou no Jutsu
Subname: Technique of hydro-prison
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: This technique creates a water bubble around the enemy as a in prison, then reinforcing the bubble with a Ice capsule so that the enemy cannot leave and every moment that passes is less air in the lungs until they die of drowning.
Very funny, B rank...yea not a chance in hell. Atleast A rank, due to the ease that it can kill.

Name: Kiri no endan Shokyo
Subname: Technical illusory fog Final Extender
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Description:
The ninja made stamps, spending a large amount of chakra, to extend the previously created fog for even longer. This technique is a Genjutsu, which requires that the fog is active in any Jutsu, this will make the fog lasts four times as long.
Why do you need like....3 of this?


Name: Kiri no Kaihi
Subname: Avoidance fog.
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Hyoton
Description: The dense fog produces slurred rivals, making it difficult to success, being the master of murder as fluid as the gas that makes up the fog, the ninja is capable of running strikes to the confused enemy.
Add more information or denied
Name: Sensatsu Suishou
Subname: Thousand needles of ice
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Hyoton
Description: With your strength and chakra you beam a fall and shower of needles of ice to go over your opponent.
A jutsu registured by the Yuki clan on here, Denied

Name: Aisu Tsubasa
Subname: ice wings
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Hyoton
Description: The ninja concentrating his chakra can convert wind into ice and combined with water which is attached to its back creating a large Ice Wing that will give you speed. Its effect lasts the entire battle. The wings are not immortal and if skills are used they can be destroyed by fire or hard attacks, when using the wings you are more affected by electrical attacks.
A rank with an obvious weakness to fire

Name: Hi-Uindo-Gogyou Ninpu
Subname: Wind Water Ice
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Hyoton
Description: Avalanche of Air water and ice. Merging water, wind a huge amount of ice, creating an avalanche. You need to dominate with almost perfection the wind and water elements to do his jutsu.
Too low of a rank, A at the miniimum, im guessing S

Name: Makyo; Hyoton; Satsu
Subname: Demonic Mirror Ice Murder
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Hyuton
Description: The continuation from the Ice Trap jutsu, the user will force the chakra in the ice trap to explode outwards, shattering the form of ice in such a way that it would be fatal, the user can also use this technique to explode the mirror they themselves are in while escaping with the clans specialized body flicker. The second effect would cause shards of ice to explode in the same manner, and both forms can potentially be deadly to any nearby victims.
Demonic ice mirrors stuff, a limited and an object of the yuki clan, again denied.

Name: Kiri no Omoi
Subname: Heavy Fog.
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Hyoton
Description: It creates an environment with higher than normal gravity in the heads of the two ninjas; such is the pressure that it may even cause the enemy to suffer a fatigue by virtue of being subject to it. This technique is functional to Kirigakure no Jutsu.
Anything dealing with Gravity is denied

Name: Naguru Bai
Subname: Dual Strike
Rank: A
Type: Taijutsu
Description: Critical hits strikes pounding on the vital points bare hand or weapons to subtle and small, as kunais or needles.
Ummm....way more info needed

Name: Muon Satsujin no Jutsu
Subname: Technical silent assassination
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: Technique of murder in which the enemy has difficulty to detect the presence of the attacker.
This is killing Intent, Which is banned.

Name: Atto not Suru Yu
Subname: Agitation of the mist
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu
Description: When there is fog, the user harasses the target causing panic with fears of the target into thinking he is inferior and will die.
I see this as basically killing intent

Name: Touketsu Kagemusha/Gachigachi
Subname: Frozen Shadow Warrior/Frozen Solid
Rank: A
Type: Taijutsu/Self-Genjutsu
Description: This ability is meant to be a form of resistance to damage. Their high levels of training and mental focus allow them to move through a war torn battlefield as if they were marching through a sunny, open field. They are not invulnerable to damage, but they can "ignore" pain and are generally too focused for genjutsu to be easily used on them.
WARNING: When this Self-Genjutsu is used it causes the individual to go slightly mad, in other words they will not react to severe damage, which could place their lives in danger.
This is basically a trait on here, however im willing to let this go as long as the jutsu cannot be learned if the person has said trait

Name: Makyou Hyoushou
Subname: Demonic Ice Crystal Mirrors
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Hyoton
Description: The Ninja can create a dome of twenty-one mirrors made out of ice to trap an opponent. Twelve remain at ground level, eight are placed above the first twelve and angled toward the ground, and the final mirror is above the rest and facing the ground. The ninja can then enter one of the mirrors and instantly transport to another mirror. While moving about the bombards the opponent with attacks at very high speeds, such that the rest of the world would appear to be moving in slow motion compared to him. If the mirror ninja is in is broken, he can leap out of one of the fragments and continue his attack or move to another mirror. The technique requires a large amount of chakra to maintain, so the ninja's movement becomes progressively slower the longer he maintains the mirrors. Though they are made from ice, the mirrors are imbued with enough chakra to resist fire almost completely.
Limited, yuki clan, what else do i need to say?

Name: Sensatsu Suishou
Subname: Thousand Needles of Death
Rank: E-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Hyoton
Description: Using only a single hand to form and hold a hand seal, the user creates the needles, The user will kick water into the air, and use their kekkei kenkai combined with small spurts of chakra to make needles fly at the opponent from the water that is now air born, the amount of needles created is based on rank. These needles then come raining down on the target, and are individually aimed but cannot be controlled after sent. The amount for each rank is, five at E rank, twenty at D rank, one-hundred at C rank, two hundred fifty at B rank, five hundred at A rank and finally one thousand at S rank, although the user can decided to stop this jutsu at any time, the time in which it takes to form the needles is almost instant between each needle, giving the effect that this jutsu will create many at once, which in turn will shower the target very effectively.
Yuki clan registured jutsu

Okay....i think thats all
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PostSubject: Re: Touketsu Clan   Touketsu Clan Icon_minitimeMon May 21, 2012 9:47 pm

Well i just saw that SIlent Killing got removed from the banned list, but considering how much i denied i kinda don't see how it changes. And i guess you do have a point about the ice stuff, but be creative and don't copy other clans for Aethiest sake ((Words taken from Sketh, another mod))
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PostSubject: Re: Touketsu Clan   Touketsu Clan Icon_minitimeTue May 22, 2012 6:29 am

the slient killing is still on the list and is staying there and the ice clan I would allow but no yuki clan jutsu you must make your own jutsu
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PostSubject: Re: Touketsu Clan   Touketsu Clan Icon_minitimeThu Jun 07, 2012 11:57 pm

This has three days before i archive it.
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