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PostSubject: Little Annie   Mon May 07, 2012 6:59 pm





"My grandfather told me of a very special person."


    Name: Annie
    Middle: Unknown
    Surname: Unknown
    Age: 11
    Gender: Female
    Sexual Orientation: Bisexual

    Overall Appearance:
    Spoiler:
     
    Annie has short Violet hair. On her head she wears a cute little bunny ear set. Shortly below that her odd light Blue-Green eyes seem to stare towards one's soul. She wears a pink backpack that she likes to keep her Plushies in. On the front straps are a little buckle of a teddy bear's head. Under this she wears her little dress. The dress is Violet in color and seems quite regal compared to most. At the bottom the Bell-shape curve is engraved with an almost elegant design. Below that she wears two fairly large, for her anyway, violet and white leg warmers. And finally below that she wears a set of violet dress shoes.

    Overall Persona:
    Annie can get moody at times. She's quite spoiled for sure. She's hidden her nature as a pervert only after a few years of adaptation. After being straight forward about it and not getting what she wanted, she decided to play coy and innocent. Along with that, Annie is also not the type to discriminate as she was never taught right from wrong either. So she'll be somewhat frank sometimes, or she'll even be rude. When it comes to the Psyche. Evaluation she always fails because of her unstable nature and most interesting life before.

    Fears:
    loosing Tibbers

    Likes:
    Tibbers
    Her teacher
    Tibbers
    the rest of her puppets
    Tibbers

    Did I mention Tibbers?


    Dislikes:
    People who dislike Tibbers
    People who cause trouble for her

    Catch Phrase:
    "Awe, done already? But I'm still BOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRREEEEEEDDDDD!!!!"
    "Have you seen Tibbers?"





I.D. U N K N O W N



"Sad thing is, they weren't very important when starting out.."


    Village:Kazan
    Rank: Gennin
    Bloodline: none
    Elements: Lava(Nine tailed Wolf)
    Specialization: Puppetry
    Beginning Chakra: 160
    Beginning Stamina: 200





B L O O D . T Y P E



"He was from a rare family, I don't think they exist."


    Name: Unknown
    Clan Type: unknown
    Kekkei Genkai: none
    Clan Element: none
    Clan History: None





P A S S E D & L E A R N E D



"He was strong, weapon and jutsu wise. Right?"

Elemental Jutsu[s]



    Jutsu Name:
    Rank:
    Element:
    Range:
    Type:
    Description:

Non-Elemental Jutsu[s]




    Jutsu Name: Kugutsu no Jutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: none
    Range: short/mid
    Type: Technique
    Description:
    "The Puppet Technique is a unique ninjutsu fighting style; this technique uses chakra threads to control puppets like marionettes. Any number of chakra threads can be used to control a puppet, but users with more skill can use fewer strings per puppet. Both Chiyo and Sasori demonstrated the ability to control entire puppets perfectly using just one thread. While most puppeteers (傀儡使い, kugutsutsukai) would normally be able to control ten puppets at most (one per finger), Sasori's self-modification allowed him to control up to one hundred puppets at a time."

    Jutsu Name: Chakura no Ito
    Rank: D-S
    Element: None
    Range: Mid/Short
    Type: Technique
    Description:
    "Chakra Threads is a technique that is usually used by puppet users to allow them to control their puppets in battle. Since these strings are constructs made from very concentrated chakra, they can be seen by people besides the user. Interestingly, as well as pulling objects towards them with the strings, the user can also "push" objects away from them as well, and even get moving objects like buzzsaws.[2] Chakra can also be transferred via the strings, such as to activate some abilities in puppets.[3] The chakra strings can also be attached to other objects, allowing the user to control, or at the very least disrupt other things. In one instance, Kankurō uses chakra strings to trip Naruto Uzumaki when they first met.[4] In another, Chiyo uses chakra strings to control a person like a puppet. A skilled user can suppress the chakra to the point that the strings become invisible, as Chiyo did with the Manipulating Attack Blades to sneak a string to bind Hiruko's iron tail.[5] Kankurō has shown the ability to attach his chakra strings to those of another user's.[6] This technique is limited to one main string per finger for normal humans, but Sasori's modified core was able to emit enough strings to control over one hundred puppets."(Increases by 1 puppet each Letter rank. So D is 4, C, 5, etc..etc..etc..







W E A P O N

Instead of being able to preform elemental Jutsu, little Annie has her Puppets to preform "jutsu" for her. They produce the same affect as normal jutsu with their names and such, but doing the seals aren't always possible. Remember, it also takes at least 2 posts of not having used elemental jutsu before she can switch to another puppet. The only time this isn't needed is if she's using Zippers to ride in a non-combat zone


    Name: Tibbers
    Rank:D- S
    Description:
    Tibbers is Annie's main puppet she uses. This puppet starts out as a small teddy bear she has with her. Once activated, or rather called out, the puppet transforms in to it's natural form, a large odd puppet which you see at the top of this app with her.


    Name: Fizzles
    Rank: D-S
    Description:
    This is one of Annie's Puppets. It, like the rest, start out as a little plushie she carries with her. When she "releases it" It turns in to a large water serpent thing.
    Fizzle with it's former master:
     


    Name: Ken-Ken(Kennen)
    Rank:D-S
    Description:
    This is another of Annie's Puppets. This one however is of a sort of rock Golem. Like the rest, it starts as a little plushie.
    Spoiler:
     


    Name: Sparky
    Rank:D- S
    Description:
    This is Annie's last Puppet. This is of course a Weasel that takes the form of a plushie.
    Spoiler:
     


    Name: Zippers
    Rank: D-S
    Description:
    This is Annie's special Puppet. This is of course a horse that takes the form of a plushie. She usually uses it to ride on so she doesn't have to walk.
    Spoiler:
     

    Name: Zakura
    Rank: D-S
    Description:
    This is Annie's Scythe. She uses this in her self defense when she wishes not to use her puppets or is unable to use them.
    Spoiler:
     



[SC] TRAITS.

Noope




N O T . F O R G O T T E N


"Dad. You grew up with them, right? Mind telling me their story?"

    Birth Date: Fall
    Home Village/Current: Kazan
    Parents: Deceased
    Siblings: Deceased
    Sensei / Role Model: Rayne
    History:

    Annie was born and orphaned as a child. After she was dropped off at the Orphanage, she was taught through her life to use Puppets. This was because of her constant like for little Plushies. She'd use Chakra threads and make them have tea with her or other fun things. Though eventually she moved on to a few pranks here an there. With time, she entered the Academy and was taught from there.

    Eventually, she was given the privilege to be taught by a Sennin. She was chose to eventually grow up and become a Sennin. Now she lives in a small shack somewhere outside of Kazan where her puppets live happily with her. Of course, she's the most oddest of people as she seems to have the most love for puppets beyond all possible.


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PostSubject: Re: Little Annie   Tue May 08, 2012 6:15 pm

I don't see work in progress[W.I.P] so iguessing that this is a complete app right? Well for starters I really like your character and I'm interested in seeing how her story unfolds but my job is to be unbias and actually chrck your app. So here are the issues so far

Issues:

1) The chakra strings' description seems very accurate, so youu must have gotten it from the naruto wikkipedia which is fine, but lable it as D- S rank that way genins can use it too and I don't find chuunins using 100 puppets. If you please be specific about how many puppets one can control at each rank.


2) Your puppets according to your descriptions are all S ranked, so you wouldn't be able to use them. Mark them as D- S rank and be specific about what they can do at every rank even if its absolutely nothing, be sure to note that.also when placed as D-S rank you'll have to train them for every rank in respect to the site rules about training.

3) So you're starting off with five puppets. That's fine but each puppet gives you control over a different element . I have no problem with that since you have to wait 2 posts inorder to use a different elemental jutsu everytime that you want to switch. But still you're using five elements so I'm going to have to ask an admin for permission to see if that is acceptable since your character does not have elemental control herself. Ill let you know by the time you fix the rest of the issues.

4) Also put what village your character is a part of. I know that you've indicated already that you're of kazangakure its important to put that in the info right above rank, marked village. Where you're from might not be where your character is that is why you must answer that question.

If you have any questions about what I've posted or what to do contact a mod or an admin in the chatbox or pm me your questions, especially if they are specific

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PostSubject: Re: Little Annie   Tue May 08, 2012 6:40 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Little Annie   Tue May 08, 2012 7:02 pm

According to your chakra strings you would be able to control only one puppet at a time, is that what you intended? Cause if it increaseby 1 every rank. So that by c rank it two, then at s rank you can only control 5 is that right



According to your chakra string, you can only control one puppett at a time is that what you intended?












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PostSubject: Re: Little Annie   Tue May 08, 2012 7:08 pm

Genin's can control up to 4 puppets, proof http://naruto-crisiss20.forumotion.com/t214-nr-systems

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PostSubject: Re: Little Annie   Tue May 08, 2012 7:14 pm

It's not what I intended lol. But until I get other non-elemental puppets I sorta can't use another one XD However Allow me to fix this.
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PostSubject: Re: Little Annie   Tue May 08, 2012 7:34 pm

Yes fix this and let me know when its fixed.

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PostSubject: Re: Little Annie   Tue May 08, 2012 8:52 pm

Hey guess what I spoke to Sketh and he said that you can keep the puppets and use thier elements if you have their elements yourself. So ultimately you will end up having three elemental puppets by S rank, and you can even use Tibbers now if you start off with fire.

Look im sorry that you've been getting a hard time around here. I am no witness to that and people might say otherwise but the fact that you feel abused is what im concerned about. I want to help your time here become pleasurable and even though i cant do much as a temp mod, i can do little things like finding ways to make your puppet idea work. I didnt agree to being mod to make anyone's life a living hell, so im personally hoping that you dont rage quit and that you just get this app approved and go have fun.

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PostSubject: Re: Little Annie   Fri May 11, 2012 9:44 am

Fixed this up.
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PostSubject: Re: Little Annie   Fri May 11, 2012 3:38 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Little Annie   Fri Jun 08, 2012 11:25 am

check your app for stamina and chakra

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