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PostSubject: Kai Fuuma (I'm back! FINISHED)   Mon Apr 30, 2012 7:16 am



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"My grandfather told me of a very special person."



    Name: Kai
    Middle:-
    Surname: Fuuma
    Age: 17
    Gender: Female
    Sexual Orientation: Straight

    Overall Appearance:

    Well to begin with her physical attributes is very different then others, as a female she is expected not to have such a well toned out body. She use to be somewhat a good ghost when it came to skin color, and it seems as if as she got older skin color started to come naturally to her. Which means during winter time she loses a bit of her skin color to her being pale, but it’s barely noticeable unless you’re just staring too hard.

    But other than that she doesn’t wear ear rings or any type of piercing on her body, she has normal 5’7 height and her weight is long forgotten but you could look and tell that anyone hitting that is going to be satisfied due to her very large breast and nice body. Her original hair color is black, but she prefers to change it time after time for reasons of her own life, feeling its quite boring having the same looks. Her current hair color as well as eye color is a nice light purple. Her hair length goes nicely to the end of her back, nice and straight.

    She has quite a few outfits she wears throughout different events, and to be honest she usually will steal an outfit but the one she likes the most which she carries by a special means is an…well a basically jump suit which is short sleeve in the sections of the arms and legs which at the end of the limbs show purple at the ends of the sleeve which in fact was a mistake because it wasn’t a sleeve but more a long glove for the arm in which has two valuable diamonds on her outfits on each arm.


    Then she got these leggings which are made of some special fabric because they never seemed to rip at all, which is fortunate for Kai. And once again it has purple by it and due to the leggings being so long the outfit is perfect with the shoes and to top it all off she sometimes if she is feeling fancy decides to hit them with the shades.

    Overall Persona:


    This section of the application would most likely be more difficult or at least more spread out. First the explanation of her main dislikes, dirty things, dirty people and most of all dirtying up herself which is ironic because she is quite a tough shinobi and can’t stand getting dirty and avoid getting her clothing or body dirty at all cost, so even though she could be fighting an opponent which could be three times more powerful then her she is still battling to keep herself as clean and neat as possible. She hate dirty people because its to her very unhealthy, especially for females because if they are musty then that means she can’t take care of her self DOWN there in her opinion and own words.



    She has a low tolerance for half of things that go down in normal civil life which is why she enjoys being a ninja because she would have went to jail for murder a long time ago. She has a deep passion for being a ninja, she enjoys the encounters with opponents and allies, and depending on the situation she doesn’t mind losing as long as you can entertain her long in the fight. But with her past which is as bad as it is, she has a vast amount of knowledge and loves knowing things, she isn’t a nosy person she just likes finding things out, a habit is what they call it but a great interest is what she call it.



    She is as quiet as a mouse at times, she has little to no fear at all due to her missing ninja past of what she been through. So many people tried certain things like ‘Killing Intent’ in which usually is like quick kills or fun depending on the user but to this girl right here it doesn’t work at all which leads them in a false sense of guard and security which most likely leads to the user death. Her thing on dating is something which is unusual, then again the same because she feels if she is going to have a boyfriend he has to be strong, and not just strong he has to be very strong and be able to interest her and overwhelm her with a sense of power and a special bond.



    She is never a fan girl and the chances of her blushing are very much unlikely. She has an amazing amount of control over her emotions which is a great trait to have in which means the guy usually doesn’t notice it. She isn’t demanding, wait that’s a lie she is demanding when needed, never getting her hopes up for anything in this world yet. She can pick out real friends and fake friends, wouldn’t matter much because of the fact that she is always on the move she barely see them unless they are a missing ninja, a famous one at least.
    Fears:
    - Losing
    - Getting sealed in a jar
    - Dying

    Likes:
    - Winning
    - Burning Stuff
    - Living
    Dislikes:
    - Weak minds
    Catch Phrase:





I.D. U N K N O W N



"Sad thing is, they weren't very important when starting out.."


    Village:
    Rank: Order Of Chains
    Bloodline: Scorch Release
    Elements:
    Primary elemental affinity : Katon Release
    Specialization: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, Genjutsu






P A S S E D & L E A R N E D

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[SC] TRAITS.


The Formidable:You have practiced so freaking much its not funny. You have complete understanding of how to not overcompensate with how much your body does and when it gets sore, you're able to recover a bit faster. Your chakra is also very controlled as well and with that 50% word count decrease for training.


Chakra Taisha Heijun
Rank: -
Skill: Forbidden
Special: Passive
Description: This skill here is one of the main reasons why she is so deadly and an incredible ally. Performing a Forbidden technique on her body for enhancements caused her to gain a few perks and this is one of them. She was given a power not of gaining more chakra, but instead automatically regenerating it. Kai constantly regenerates a D rank amount of chakra each post, however if she does not use chakra for at least one post, this amount increases to a C rank amount of chakra each post.





[center]N O T . F O R G O T T E N


"Dad. You grew up with them, right? Mind telling me their story?"

    Birth Date: Summer
    Home Village/Current:
    Parents: Unknown
    Siblings: Unknown
    Sensei / Role Model: Kukazu(Dead),
    History:

    Spoiler:
     



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PostSubject: Re: Kai Fuuma (I'm back! FINISHED)   Tue May 01, 2012 6:08 pm



"He was strong, weapon and jutsu wise. Right?"

Elemental Jutsu[s][/center]





    Name: Katon: Hoheki [Fire Release: Flame Wall]
    Rank: A
    Range: 1-5 Meters [10m high, 20m wide, and 5m thick]
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Elemental Affinity: Katon ~ Fire
    Description:
    The user summons a flame that comes in between him and his enemy. After stabilized, the user can push the wall at his target.Can block A-Rank techniques of almost any kind.
    Drawbacks:
    -Can only block B-Rank water jutsu.


    Name: Chi Kaon Hari [Fire Release: Thousand Heat Needles]
    Rank: B
    Range: 1-5 Meters
    Type: Ninjutsu,
    Elemental Affinity: Katon - Fire
    Description:
    Using this technique, Kai gathers some heat from the air and surrounding environment into one thousand long needles. He then directs them to a specific target at high speed, leaping backwards before impact so he doesn't get caught in the crossfire. While the needles do surround a target from all sides, they don't appear above the target, creating an escape route. Kai is able to perform this jutsu with one-handed seals, allowing her to pin an opponent's arm and attack while they cannot use any techniques themselves.
    Drawbacks:
    -Range of this technique is very small.
    -Takes some seconds for the needles to form, which also gives opponent time to get out of the five meter range.




    Name: Katon: Raion: irikuchi [Fire Style: Lion: Approach]
    Rank: B
    Range: 1-5 Meters
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Elemental Affinity: Katon ~ Fire
    Description:
    This is one of the low level destruction techniques crafted by The Burning Lotus, this is the lowest level of her Fire Lion techniques. By manipulating a small amount of fire chakra into the dominant hand, the user can make the fire expand to create the form of a Lion. The Lion-shape remains connected to the user's hand, this increases strength as well as gives 2nd degree burns after every touch.
    Drawbacks:
    - Can be put out with a C-Rank water jutsu.
    - Last for about 4 post
    - Cool down: 8 post





    Name: Katon: Nenshou Satsujin [Fire Style: Burning Murder]
    Rank: C-A [Train A-Rank]
    Range: 1-25 Meters
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Elemental Affinity: Katon ~ Fire
    Description:
    This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of fire after focusing chakra through the arm and blasting it outward, this technique is one of those 'As powerful as you make it' technique which is powered and created by the Burning Lotus. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to burning an opponent to a powerful stream of fire capable of ripping through solid rock, its more used as a basic fire attack that can turn quite dangerous if put enough chakra and had enough skill for it.
    Drawbacks:
    Cooldown: 3 post




    Name: Horou no Jutsu [Fire Release • Fire Prison]
    Rank: C
    Range: 1-10 [8 Meters in Diameters]
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Elemental Affinity: Katon - Fire Release
    Description:
    A skill in which generates a circular flame upon the ground, raising up bars of flame and a covering over top. This intense flame heats all within it, preventing moisture from being created from the inside with the dryness of the air. Touching the sides results in various burns, and while this jutsu is used it can be linked to any other fire jutsu and the jutsu will be fired at the person inside the prison.
    Note:This prison jutsu is self sustaining
    Drawbacks:
    -The opponent can simply move out of range
    -You can see the line coming from the user on the ground.
    -It takes a few seconds to completely circle and add the bars and lid




    Name: Atsusa Shoudou - Heat Impulse
    Rank: A
    Range: 10 Meters diameter
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Elemental Affinity: Katon - Fire
    Description:
    Katon • Atsusa Shoudou is a Ninjutsu technique utalizing the Fire element.This technique allows the user to release an impulse of super heated flames all around their body and send them outwards. The flames can inflict third degree burns. The speed is one meter per second.
    Drawbacks:
    -Friends can be burned too
    Cooldown: 3 post





    Name: Katon: Atsusa Oshi [Fire Style : Heat Push]
    Rank: A
    Range: 1-15 Meters
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Elemental Affinity: Katon ~ Fire
    Description:
    This attack is a technique that revolves around heat itself but the Impact of this technique itself is pushing. Absorbing a bit of heat around the air from a 5 feet radius, and concentrating chakra with it he is able to focus it into his arms. Then impulsing the chakra mixed heat, the heat is blasted outward, more like a red looking air blast in which is capable of extreme burns at a fast rate. If caught in this blast it will push the opponent back and while caught in it will continue its burning sensation , This is a highly powerful technique that can be used to even repell some ninjutsu or objects. If by any chance there is a shinobi that has the strengthen body enough to be able to withstand the attack and still be standing they will be enveloped by the technique and suffer worse damage for it unless they find a way to avoid being burnt. Speed is five meters per second. (It looks like the video game Infamous lightning push)
    Drawbacks:
    -Has to be around a area of heat



    Name: Katon: Hoheki rakka [Flame Wall Drop]
    Rank: A
    Range: 1-5 Meters [10m high, 20m wide, and 5m thick]
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Elemental Affinity: Katon
    Description:
    This is a more offensive version of the offensive technique "Flame Wall" Technique created from Kai Fuuma. instead of creating it in front of her she use the heat in the air above his opponent to make the wall and drop it down on her opponent. This can also block A-Rank techniques of almost any kind. This technique is usually used for straight assassination or war purposes.
    Drawbacks:
    - It has to be at least 15 meters above
    - Takes some time to create such a large wall, this could give there opponent time to notice the heat in the air above them
    - A B-Rank water jutsu can take this fire out


    Name: Heat Sensory
    Rank: -
    Range: 100 Meters
    Type: Passive
    Description:
    This is not a technique, this is a skill granted through the high use of fire and skill she is able to use. She through the intense four training she created a skill to be able to sense all types of heat from a large distance, this means she is able to detect others through other means besides the five senses. The range was 100 meters, this doesn't really cost anything but to focus on a certain object Kai may need to move in closer, if needed maybe need to make contact with it but she can sense heat of many kinds from body heat, to solar heat to underground heat to heat through walls its a quite interesting way of sensing.


    Name: Katon: Houka Tate [Fire Release: Fire Shield]
    Rank: B
    Range: 3 feet in diamter
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Element: Katon
    Description:
    This jutsu may be used for offence of defense. The user concentrates katon chakra into his/her hand then manipulates it to take form of a flaming shield with the hand in the center. This jutsu is effective at blocking taijutsu attacks, and will end up burning the opponent if he comes in contact with it. Metal projectiles can pass through the shield easily.
    Drawbacks:
    - C-Rank can easily take this down



    Name: Katon Kyanseru [Fire Cancel]
    Rank: A
    Range: Close
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Elemental Affinity: Fire Release ~ Katon
    Description:
    This is a very unique way of being able to actually destroy a technique of the fire element. By absorbing a sample of the heat around the user they are able to calculate how much chakra is needed to match the fire technique coming there way, before it hits or can fully activate, the user could use that heat to adjust a coating of chakra energy with the exact opposite frequency using that and putting that same frequency into a limb Of course the frequency chakra will be burned out but the technique will be destroyed instantly upon contact.
    Drawbacks:
    - This is a skill only used for Ninjutsu and Taijutsu dealing with the fire element.
    - Can only cancel form E-A fire techniques.



    Name: Atsui Kawa(Hot Skin)
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Self
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Elemental Affinity: Fire Release ~ Katon
    Description:
    There were many things that Lotus picked up hanging and training under Forbidden art users. Performing a Forbidden technique on her body for enhancements caused her to gain a few perks and this is one of them. Because of her constant use, fire is her element of choice she was given here more capable skin when it comes to fire and heat. This allow gives her a complete defense against fire up to her rank. This also gives her an insane amount of body heat with in making her never cold at all no matter where she goes.
    Drawbacks:
    - Her body can still catch frostbite and things of such
    - Requires a total of ten years of the fire element only.


    Name: Sauna Mist Technique (Sauna Kiri jutsu)
    Rank: B
    Range: 30 Meters
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Elemental Affinity: Fire Release ~ Katon
    Description:
    This technique is a fire jutsu used by the burning lotus; this technique creates a thick hot steaming mist in the surrounding area that is much like a sauna. This technique covers a range of about 30 meters in height and width, which makes the range pretty large. This does indeed block out the sense of sight, for everybody inside or outside the steam. This was created by Burning Lotus when she was a ninja of the mist village, and she always liked the hidden mist technique but due to her extreme high affinity to fire she couldn’t get into it, which is hence how she came up with this technique. Due to her body and her high affinity to the fire element she is unfazed by this technique, but the opponent or anyone else caught in the technique will start to wear down. By that meaning will start to tire and slow down, began to feel there body get weaker by time inside it. The steam is white, so the opponent will only feel that as they began to sweat and feel tired.


    Drawbacks:
    - Hyuuga clan Byakugan can see through this fog

    (The rest is A-Rank Up to Cannon Fire Release. )


Non-Elemental Jutsu[s]





    Name: Sagakuryuu (Art Of The Balance Fist)
    Rank: C-Rank
    Range: Close
    Type: Taijutsu
    Elemental Affinity: N/A
    Description:
    Revolving around handwork, speed, agility and marksmanship. For the users of this style of close quarters combat they have to find balance within there movements and striking. This Goken compared to Sagaku is very much the same when it comes down to the movement of the feet and the kicking structures, the handwork is different, warriors of the Goken aim for the bones of the body meanwhile Sagaku aim for the muscles of the body. One thing they are rarely trained in is strength, that is only if mandatory due to failure of attacking effect. The user of this style study the pressure points, vital areas and most of all muscles to where breaking there opponent down can be a matter of a one, two, three move if experienced enough.




    Punches/Jabs~

    The Balance fist is utilized by hitting pressure points of the body. To be a close quarter combat combatant you must have a fast body but this style of fighting teaches the student how to specifically move fast with the use of the arms. The Style punches are different from Goken and Juken due to not using full fist when it comes to punches or jabs but rather the use of knuckles which usually is the index and middle finger knuckles after balling up a fist or maybe even fingers if experienced enough. The purpose of the knuckles is so that it can make the attack lighter, and lighter equals more speed for one. Secondly, they are meant to hit in pressure points or muscles used to temporarily shut down functions in the limbs or body part or even damage the muscles rendering them useless. Do not mistaken this for Juken, it has nothing to do with the chakra points of the body but more trying to take down there opponent with fast "quick jabs" or "punches". Some beginners have to hit very hard to be able to damage a muscles, others may just have to hit pressure points with relatively light jabs. Never has the user been taught to do a basic punch, even taught to attack with the wrist of the aim, punches could be influenced by the Drunken Fist and that the stances of balance could also be inspired by it.




    Acrobatics/Agility~

    Without this part the students of Sagaku could possibly be at a disadvantage, the jabs and punches are of no use with out being able to mix it up now and then. The students are required to work on flexibility and movement, this was to strengthen there legs when it came down to all it has to do with legs. This is where the kicking with Goken are very alike in many ways. Due to the high speed of the punches and jabs, the kicks look much slower then any other attacks. The objectives are to be able to train the students so that they can flip, jump high into the air and be able to make fluid and very unpredictable movements unlike the predictable Goken. So most experienced Taijutsu users using this style of balance are able to not use chakra at all and move through any amount of jutsu through just solid movement or by jumping. Although a very useful method of fighting, the legwork is vital to this style of fighting and is used to not only get close but to give in powerful attacks behind the light and quick jabs.


    Drawbacks:
    -Taijutsu Major Required To Teach it to others.








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PostSubject: Re: Kai Fuuma (I'm back! FINISHED)   Tue May 01, 2012 8:59 pm


Jutsu Name: Silent Killing Technique
Rank: -
Element: N/A
Range: Short- Long
Type: Style
Description:
As the name suggests, this technique is simply a very quiet method of killing an opponent, usually from behind with a blade. Additionally, because the user is very silent, it cannot be defended against. The user will often slit their opponent's throat, preventing any cry that might give them away. The Seven Ninja Swordsmen of the Mist are said to be masters of this technique, and were even good enough to track and kill opponents through sound alone.



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PostSubject: Re: Kai Fuuma (I'm back! FINISHED)   Wed May 02, 2012 5:43 am

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PostSubject: Re: Kai Fuuma (I'm back! FINISHED)   Thu May 03, 2012 5:49 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Kai Fuuma (I'm back! FINISHED)   Fri May 04, 2012 9:21 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Kai Fuuma (I'm back! FINISHED)   Sun May 06, 2012 12:15 pm

ARE YOU FUCKING SERIOUS


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PostSubject: Re: Kai Fuuma (I'm back! FINISHED)   Sun May 06, 2012 6:24 pm

SOOOO sorry for the wait. I'll be trying to look over any app that hasn't been looked at until they have all been checked.


Rank: Missing Ninja (Order Of Chains)----One or the other Please


Name: Atsusa Shoudou - Heat Impulse
Rank: A
Range: 10 Meters diameter
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-type: Supplementary, Offensive, Defensive
Elemental Affinity: Katon - Fire
Notation: Secret Technique
Handsigns: Tiger, Dragon, Monkey
Description:
Katon • Atsusa Shoudou is a Ninjutsu technique utalizing the Fire element.This technique allows the user to release an impulse of super heated flames all around their body and send them outwards. The flames can inflict third degree burns. The speed is one meter per second.
Drawbacks:
-Friends can be burned too---This isn't much of a drawback because any technique would injure a friendly. Plus this isn't the site's jutsu format.

Overall, change to the correct Jutsu format and I will look again.

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PostSubject: Re: Kai Fuuma (I'm back! FINISHED)   Sun May 06, 2012 7:19 pm

Alright I'll add a cooldown but sorry I have so much jutsu I thought this site would be much better. My format has a drawback on it.
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PostSubject: Re: Kai Fuuma (I'm back! FINISHED)   Sun May 06, 2012 9:14 pm

Name: Katon: Raion: irikuchi [Fire Style: Lion: Approach]
Rank: B
Range: 1-5 Meters
Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Katon ~ Fire
Description:
This is one of the low level destruction techniques crafted by The Burning Lotus, this is the lowest level of her Fire Lion techniques. By manipulating a small amount of fire chakra into the dominant hand, the user can make the fire expand to create the form of a Lion. The Lion-shape remains connected to the user's hand, this increases strength as well as gives 2nd degree burns after every touch.
Drawbacks:
Can be put out with a C-Rank water jutsu.
-D-Rank Chakra cost every post

Since it's a B-ranked jutsu, it should use the amount of chakra a B-rank jutsu uses. Remove the D-rank chakra cost and just say how many posts the jutsu lasts for with a small cooldown.

This is all I can find, honestly. Just fix this portion and you should be all set.
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PostSubject: Re: Kai Fuuma (I'm back! FINISHED)   Sun May 06, 2012 9:17 pm

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