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PostSubject: Re: Bastian Bishamonten Nuitari   Sat Apr 14, 2012 12:02 pm



"IMPERIUS REX!!!!."
    Name: Bastian
    Middle: Bishamonten
    Surname: Nuitari
    Age: 47 [Looks Mid-20s]
    Gender: Male
    Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual
    Relationship Status: Widowed

    Overall Appearance:
    Bastian is easily seen as a man that holds himself, as well as all the things he does, in high regard. He has a very proud posture whenever he stands and even something as simple as walking simply shows that the man is someone of high stature. He stands at 5'9 and has particularly broad shoulders. He weighs 165lbs and has the build of a man that obviously stays in shape just by looking at his toned body. His skin tone is slightly tanned making him just a shade darker than the average Japanese male. His hair is black and fairly long easily reaching the top area of his back, thus he will always keep it tied back leaving only the front most part of his hair untied. His eyes are almost golden in appearance due to them being a shade of yellow, this added with his natural fierce look may make him appear intimidating to some. His teeth are white and the canine teeth are slightly longer than the average person giving him a more animalistic side to his natural appearance.

    In terms of attire, Bastian has very simple tastes in fashion seeing that he does see himself as shinobi, so he will normally dress in clothes that reflect as such. He has three layers of upper body attire that are both comfortable and do not hinder his movements in any way at all. The first layer is a simple long sleeved white shirt that fits perfectly to his body and the length of the shirt stops just at the waist area, this shirt is always tucked in. Over the first layer he wears a fairly larger red shirt that fits a bit more loosely than the first layer shirt. The sleeves are very large and have secret pockets in them that may hold minor things such as letters or none pointy objects. This shirt too is always tucked in and it allows only slight visibility of the first layer shirt just at the neck area. The final layer is a all black vest that stretches down to the knees and is the most loose article of clothing on his body. The vest has several little pockets on the inside where actual small weapons can be put such as senbon or darts. On the back of this vest is his family symbol that was created by none other than Bastian himself upon establishing his family as one of the more notable one's in Kazangakure.

    His lower body attire matches the second layer and third layer in terms of color scheme. The pants are made of the same fabric as the second layer and are dark red. The belt of the of the pants is black and made of the same fabric as the third layer and can easily be used to tie down his two weapons, Death and War. The pants themselves go all the way down and folds so that they can tuck into the all black socks that are on the feet. In terms of foot wear, Bastian technically has none though his socks are extremely durable and made to be able to walk even on glass without it cutting into his foot.


    Overall Persona:

    Charismatic
    Bastian is a man that if gifted with knowing how to say just the right things to get what he wants. This is especially applies to when he speaks to the opposite gender, as he is quite the smooth talker. Being that sweeping woman off their feet is one of his favorite past times he may sometimes even lose focus of his true goals, though these occurrences are far and few between. He is often times the life of any party or celebration he goes to and can get along with just about anyone he meets. When it comes to business, he is naturally talented at working his plans into the heads of people, by any means to make sure he gets what he wants. One might believe that Bastian just enjoys enjoys hearing himself talk though this might not be far from truth he never spouts random nonsense unless he is simply teasing someone. He is a man who wants alot and in his mind it takes a certain "gift of gab" to get anywhere in life.

    Inquisitive
    Bastian has a thirst for knowledge that is matched only by his lust for money, fame, and woman. He is a firm believer in the whole "a mind is a terrible thing to waste" concept. So he will usually study thoroughly about certain things that may hold value in the future. This could be ranging from island geography or urban legends that may surround certain islands. Because he is always looking to make more money he feels such knowledge is necessary so that he may actually have a general idea of what he is looking for. This may also come into play, which go hand and hand with his charismatic ways, when he needs to pump people for information. Because of his natural way with words he can easily get information from people, even if it means putting together key parts of what a person is saying just to get an understanding. This in mind he will rarely jump into any altercation if he can, he would rather pick the brains of people to determine if he should even bother fighting them.

    Narcissist and Natural Swag
    Bastian's number one fan is Bastian. The man loves himself almost as much as he loves making more money. He believes himself to be a visionary unlike other people these days. He already feels he is the epitome of the greatness and isn't shy in the least to admit it. To him the world is his stage and he plays the role of the leading man. Which may lead many to believe he might be a fame junkie, and though this may not be far from true his desire for more power and money out weigh his desire for fame. Simply put the man's ego is off the charts and it is quite obvious by the way he carries himself that he is extremely confident in all he does. He does somewhat care what others think in this aspect as he feels all should see him as he wants to be seen. As a result he will often make decisions that would never conflict with his "reputation" as he would state, making him an unpredictable man as no one can truly guess what he has going on in his head.

    Avarice
    Money is always the motivation for Bastian to move forward. To him money is power, and this power grants its master the possibility to do anything. This in mind, he is always plotting on how he can acquire more of it as fast as possible. He isn't above double-crossing others to acquire money either and will smile in your face as he does it. Only in the most severe cases, like for example his life being on the line, will he ever abandon money. Though he never openly shows his affection for it as any good thief will know that secrecy is apart of diplomacy as well.

    Callous and Ambitious
    Bellow Bastian's outgoing exterior lies his true nature. He is a man who cares little for others, with possibly his on close family as the only exception. Because he is such a driven individual he will always do whatever he can to see that he gets what he needs. He feels that the best way to kill someone is to take everything from them, though he is cold he wont always resort to killing though he isn't above brutal beatings. Because of the fact he demands respect he is prone to be aggressive if he feels disrespected. And the fact he rarely shows his true intentions, its always hard to tell if he is angered though people who are around him long enough might notice when he is angered. His signs usually revolve around scratching his head, giving a wide grin, or cracks his neck.

    Fears:
    Bastian has one fear that ultimately makes him push himself to ensure he is never put in the predicament. He fears losing everything he has ever earned for himself. He loves living the life as a leader and a wealthy man and ending up as a poor man is such a great fear that he is willing to die before living a life like that.

    Like
    • Honorable People
    • History
    • War Strategies
    • Katana's and Small Projectiles
    • Children (His Own)
    • Money
    • Achieving Goals
    • Marijuana
    • Good Company

    Dislike
    • Dishonorable People
    • Repeating Himself
    • To Much Optimism
    • Disrespect of Any Kind


    Catch Phrase:
    "Imperius Rex."
    "Cry Bastian! And let slip the dogs of war!" (Battle Cry)
    "I smell the fear on you..."
    "Prostrate..."




I.D. U N K N O W N

"Could you imagine me being as lame as you?"

    Village: Kazangakure
    Rank: Kage
    Bloodline: N/A
    Elements: Katon - Fuuton - Suiton
    Limted Element: Boil Release
    Specialization: Kenjutsu - Ninjutsu - Genjutsu
    Beginning Chakra: 295
    Beginning Stamina: 305


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PostSubject: Re: Bastian Bishamonten Nuitari   Sat Apr 14, 2012 12:03 pm

P A S S E D & L E A R N E D

"Show me your best least you fall like the rest..."
Elemental Jutsu[s]

    Katon Jutsu:
     

    **Note** Rather than a fan, Bastian has learned to use his four-sided spear as a means to do the wind jutsu that would normally require a fan.
    Canon Fuuton:
     

Non-Elemental Jutsu[s]


    Custom Genjutsu:
     

    Academy Jutsu:
     

    Canon Genjutsu:
     

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PostSubject: Re: Bastian Bishamonten Nuitari   Sat Apr 14, 2012 12:04 pm

W E A P O N


20 Kunai
10 Explosive Tags
10 Already made kunai with Exploding tags attached to them
10 Flash Tags
40 Senbon
10 Senbon (Wrapped in a exploding tag)
4 Exploding Shuriken
Shinobi Gas Mask (Anbu)



    Name: Death's Shroud
    Fused Element: N/A
    Appearance: The armour is fairly bulky in large, but it is also chakra infused and it has the ability to weigh nothing at all despite it being extremely durable, being able to easily deflect away simple projectiles (ninja tools, and C-ranked and lower projectile jutsu) with ease. The armour covers all of his body and even comes with an helmet, though it is rarely worn unless the situation calls for it. The armour is black which is yet another symbol that shows who this person is since Bastian is renowned for his black armour. Only able to be worn with those with Tank Lv 3 only.
    Spoiler:
     
    Rank: S-Rank
    Special Abilities:
    Origin: A armour created by Sebastian Nuitari, Bastian's father, in order to commemorate his son becoming the first Kazankage. The armour itself serves as his badge of position as it has the village symbol and the symbol of the Nuitari on the back parallel to each other on the upper half of the armour.


    Name: Death's Hand [Quad-Spear]
    Rank: A
    Fused Element: Fuuton
    Description: Simply put this a chakra blade that was shaped into a four-sided spear that can detach at the center to make two dual weapons. The weapon is decorated though the most noticeable symbol on it is the family crest on each of the blades that stands for "Nuitari". The weapon itself is only a foot shorter than Bastian, so the weapon is very easy to see and its due to his use of the weapon that Bastian is easily identifiable just by recognizing the weapon. The weapon is known to be used like a windmill in order to do jutsu that would normally require a fan.

    Origin: Where the weapon originally came from goes hand in hand with many other weapons of legend. The weapon was said to have been a gift for a shinobi King, or a man who proclaimed himself as such. The weapon was meant to give the impression the man was everywhere at once to scare his subjects into subordinations. However such thoughts were put to rest when the great self proclaimed king was killed shortly after receiving. From then on the weapon found many masters only to find the man or woman would die shortly after attaining it. The weapon was said to be cursed and that it could never be mastered because it always killed its owner before they truly unlocked the true potential of the weapon. Over the decades it found its way into the treasure vault of Kazangakure where the young Bastian eventually found it. At the time the young man had earned many accolades on his mission and during war time that he was granted one treasure from the Kazan vault. He instantly picked the cursed weapon as his own and despite the warning he decided to claim it as his own.

    Bastian and the cursed blade went until many battles since that day and despite the weapons best efforts, Bastian was never killed. He would fall prey to traps and even at one time was captured and tortured by the enemy and yet manage to escape with his life. It was assumed that the weapon relented and allowed Bastian remain its master. From then on the weapon became synonymous with Bastian himself, the weapon was even eventually named after the man and was considered his very hand. The weapon ultimately became a symbol of who Bastian was and anyone who was familiar with the weapon would know that its wielder was Bastian. As ti stands now it is assumed the weapon was destroyed when Bastian was assumed killed. However being that he lives, unknown to the rest of the world, so to does Death's Hand.



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PostSubject: Re: Bastian Bishamonten Nuitari   Sat Apr 14, 2012 12:04 pm

N O T . F O R G O T T E N
"My life was grand. I have no regrets."

    Birth Date: Summer (June 9th)
    Home Village/Current: Kazangakure
    Parents:
      Sebastian Bishamon Nuitari (Father/Alive)
      Furie Nuitari (Mother/Alive)

    Siblings:
      Isis Bishamon Nuitari (Sister/Unknown *Explained in history*)
      Vagabond Nuitari (Brother/Deceased)

    Family
      Serene Nuitari (Wife/Deceased)
      Rina Nuitari [16] (Daughter/Adopted/Alive)
      Maxwell Nuitari 16 (Son/Adopted/Alive)
      Sabure Bishamonten Nuitari [25] (Son/Unknown *Explained in history*)

    Sensei / Role Model:
      Sebastian Nuitari (Father)


History
Pre-Birth (It's A Boy)
    Sebastian Nuitari was a loyal shinobi in Kazangakure though he had only achieved the rank of jounin throughout his shinobi career. He was renowned for his use of kenjutsu and had even become a known teacher of the art and had even sparred with many of the high ranked shinobi who sought to increase their knowledge in kenjutsu. This was how he met the woman that would become his wife, the Anbu shinobi Furie Cascade. The young woman had come to Sebastian in order to become better at her craft, but the student-teacher relationship quickly became much more. The two spent almost everyday together, even training other shinobi as a team. It didn't take long before their love took the form and marriage following shortly after. By this time the two had become known enough that they were offered positions on the shinobi council. During this time no Kage existed to lead the people so they simply choose individuals to represent the village thus was the creation of the short-lived council.

    It was during their time on the council that the two started to build up the Nuitari name. The father, because of his love for kenjutsu, naturally was gifted with the ability to forge weapons. Though weapons weren't branded with the seal, people from all around came in order to have a weapon crafted by Sebastian. Furie on the other hand continued her career as a member of the council as well as an active shinobi, despite the protest of other council members. It didn't take long before the name, Nuitari, to be on the lips of any person who wasn't living under a rock. The family made a minor fortune, enough to elevate the name Nuitari from simple commoner to almost known across the land. It was at the peak of their careers that Bastian was born first child of what would be three as time passed. It was then that Furie decided to officially retire as an active shinobi and council member in order to raise her son, something Sebastian approved of. Both parents were happy that they finally had a child to bless the love they had for each other, someone to continue the legacy they worked so hard to build.


Early Life (Before Academy)
    As a youth, Bastian was what most would consider from a child of two successful shinobi. He was given anything he wanted and because of that he was a very spoiled child. However, he was very outgoing and when he wasn't making trouble in the village; he could be found surrounded by good friends. He had a knack for getting along with just about anyone and even being a smooth talker, saving him from many spankings for his little misdeeds. His life changed when he was exposed to his first shinobi experience where he witnessed his father having a friendly spar with a fellow shinobi. Almost immediately, at the age of 5, the boy was enamored with the shinobi arts and begged his father to teach him. However, his father wanted his son to focus more on things that could make his son more wealthy rather than risking his life as a shinobi. Even when he protested to his mother, Bastian would get the same speech from her. They claimed that they worked hard enough to where the young boy could live a normal life as a regular citizen rather than a weapon for the village. Not being one to take no for an answer, Bastian would take matters into his own hands.

    From then on Bastian learned to observe and learn, since no one in the village would teach him. When his father sparred, Bastian took notes of his movements and would go and mimic what he saw until he knew the movement like it was apart of his memory. He did as he was told and studied often, but when he was away from home he would train his body to have more stamina and strength. It was his drive that influenced a few of his friends to the point they had a small training team together. Some of the children would show little tricks they had learned to the others and each would practice with each other almost on a daily basis. Pretty soon their little secret training group become known by the children's parents and it was only through seeing their son's determination to learn, that Sebastian and Furie agreed to allow him to train. The ultimatum being that he had to be willing to study just as hard as he would train, something Bastian had no issue with. It was also at this time that these same children made history in the village as being the largest group of children to ever enroll in the academy with the ages being between 7 to 9. Bastian himself was at when he enrolled in the ninja academy.


Academy - Genin (Imperius Rex)
    The group of young students that came in with Bastian were considered to be the "genius generation" since all of them seemed to excel at learning the arts. They maintained their same learning method which was practice and support each other. No one was surprised that each person had great teamwork skills and knew how to adapt to working with different people. They had, after all, been doing something to similar to that since before they were all in the academy. Bastian only stood out more than the others, because he was known as the one who had brought all his friends together with his own desire to be a shinobi. At the age of 9, he had already begun to add more to honor to the Nuitari name. He was known for being a wise child due to his parents instilling the idea that a shinobi that his mentally strong can easily defeat a physically stronger one. Naturally his example made his fellow "geniuses" work harder which made people believe that Bastian was a natural leader.

    When the time came for graduation, Bastian had just turned 10 and like everyone could assume his friends graduated right along with him. Now that they were genin, they were eager to apply all they had learned over the years on actual missions. However, early in their careers would prove to be something that would put an end to days of happiness and joy. The mission was a big one so they had sent two squads of genin each lead by a jounin. The task was to simply escort a man to the next village over, however, they didn't know that there were to be many people after this persons head. Both groups were attacked and in the ruckus both of the jounin were killed leaving only the genin to fend for themselves. Bastian took charge immediately, not giving the enemy a chance to prepare another attack. He sent a single genin back to inform the nearest outpost about what had happened, hoping help could arrive before they all were killed. By the time the genin returned with help everyone was dead and Bastian was missing.

    Abducted by his attackers, they only allowed him to live when they discovered he was a Nuitari. They intended to put a ransom on Bastian's head and if no one paid they would slit his throat and leave him to rot in the woods. Their plan only failed when they feel alseep leaving Bastian tied to a tree. He had long since mastered the art of escaping rope during his early stages in the academy. He quickly released himself from his bounds, ignoring the pain from his wounds and broken body. With a kunai left lying around, he killed the two men that were watching him while they slept and quickly tried to make an escape before others showed up. He was saved when he came upon a young girl and her father traveling the road headed toward Kazangakure. They risked their own lives to get Bastian back home and once he reported the event to the council. He was also shocked to learn most of his friends had died on that mission, likely while they capturing him. For his work he was given the rank of chuunin, based off how he handled the situation though they all knew the ranked would matter little, or so they assumed. Bastian carried a frown on his face, but inside he felt no sadness for their deaths. It was unfortunate, but it was the life they all knew they were entering. He left only a silent prayer for hem and he went back to what he did most, except now he had more drive. He would not allow his pawns to die ever again unless he wished it, he wanted to be stronger so that he could protect as well as those that he saw beneath him. None noticed the corruption that had been born from this event.


Chuunin - Anbu (Beauty Calmed the Beast)
    At this time, Bastian had become much more ruthless when it came to his sparring and getting missions done. For a long time shinobi disliked the idea of working with him only because it was know he would go over board to get a job done. Though each mission was a success people would concerned that such a young child had so much malice in him. Many didn't wish to address the issue because they knew of what had happened to the young man in his days as a genin. When it finally came time for them to find a him a more permanent team, they placed it with the only other surviver from that tragic mission the young woman Serene Oda. The council had noticed that the two were going through similar issues and figured that they'd be better off paired together so that perhaps they could be less reckless. They were the only team that consisted of only two shinobi and like one would guess the two looked out for one another.

    For years the two went on missions constantly to keep themselves busy, so much so that they rarely could be found in the village. By the time they both were 14 they were offered the chance to participate in the Jounin Exams, another accolade that had not been done before by two that were so young. The test was grueling as one would expect since they were up against chuunin that had been training since Bastian and Serene were still in the academy. Nonetheless, the two both managed to come out on top along with a few others and were given the rank of Jounin as a reward. The village celebrated over just about any occasion and so a festival was held in honor of the new jounin. It was around this time that the spark of love first showed signs between Bastian and Serene since both had become less cold since they had been partnered together.

    Like one would assume from these two, they continued on in their shinobi career though now they were in positions of leadership. They were given squads of their own to lead, but more than often they would still be paired together for the more dangerous missions. As more time passed their little affection blossomed into love and by the age of 16 they were a well known couple in the village. Serene had went on to become a special jounin, similar to Bastian's father, since she was fond of teaching young academy students and genin. Bastian went on to become an Anbu for Kazangakure and had remained as such for many years. When both reached the age of 18 they decided to seal their affection with marriage, something no one was surprised about at all. People were happy that the two people who were involved in that tragedy so many years ago had found comfort with one another, and based off the way they acted whenever one was near they knew the two were happy.


Mini Plot (Sibling Rivalry)
    Bastian was not an only child. Throughout his career as a shinobi, his mother and father had produced twins around the time when he was still training himself with his friends before going to the academy. Few remember who the twins were since their older brother seemed to outshine so much which would lead to the yet another tragedy for the Nuitari name. Isis and Vagabond were excellent shinobi despite being overlooked, but Vagabond was one to never let such things bother him. Isis, on the other hand, despised her older brother Bastian for always being the center of attention. For years she worked hard to earn the same respect as he big brother, but always came up short. When the siblings were grown these feelings did not change at all. No one is sure what exactly pushed Isis over the edge, but her feelings for her brother's success would manifest itself in the most horrible of ways.

    Bastian and his wife had just had a child of their own at age 22, a son name Sabure Bishamonten Nuitari. For once all the anger that was bottled in couple due to their past seemed to fade with this new life. But the event was short-lived. Around this time Bastian was away on a mission while his wife recovered from giving birth to Sabure. Isis, who was 18 at the time, would use this chance to get revenge for all the neglect by sneaking into the couples home and attempting to abduct the baby. Serene fought to defend her son, but was defeated and killed by Isis who took the child and made her attempt to leave the village. She killed a number of people as she escaped, her twin brother Vagabond amongst those that were killed. It would be her own unfortunate luck that made her run into Bastian who had finished his mission faster than expected. The two fought, but only when she used the baby as a shield did Bastian falter and ultimately fall victim to an attack that would have claimed his life as well had medics not arrived. Isis escaped the village with the baby Sabure still in her clutches.


Kage - Current (The First Kazankage)
    After the kidnapping of his firstborn son and the death of his baby brother and wife. Bastian had fell into a slump and he become less active in his shinobi career for the first time ever. This laster for some years and soon his name had just faded into the background as he wallowed in his own misery. During this time the council had began to notice that other villages had a supreme shinobi that lead their village. It was voted and decided that the council needed to find a figure head to be the representation of the village itself. It was Sebastian, Bastian's father, that suggested his son for the position. Sebastian figured a job like that would help bring his son back away from his own world. However, Bastian's declined the offer at first feeling that he was not one that could protect his own family and was unworthy to represent his village. It was the birth of twin children from a couple who had a similar fate to Bastian's that brought him out of his slump. The mother and father had both died leaving only their daughter to carry on their name. Bastian had known both of the parents from a few of the missions he had gone on and felt bad that the babies had to go through the same thing he was going through. It was his idea that he adopt the childred and with that awaking his drive to be Kage of Kazan. The childred had not been named so Bastian, named the male Maxwell Nuitari and the female Reni Nuitari.

    After all the needed work was done, Bastian Bishamonten Nuitari was proclaimed the first Kage in the history of the village. After a few years in the position Bastian had returned to his old self again of being proactive in the village. As Kage he took on many students and had become known as a teacher that rivaled that of his father. His adopted children who seemed to always bring out the happiness in him again, was also a big credit to his demeanor. He found that the both ere like him in more ways then one since they wanted to become very powerful so that they could be the next Kage.

    Currently Bastian still leads the village as a Kage.



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PostSubject: Re: Bastian Bishamonten Nuitari   Sat Apr 14, 2012 12:41 pm



Name: Kai Reverse
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Self
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Description: This jutsu is an advance version of Kai only usable to those taught by Ginnai. Ginnai is able to reverse the effects of a shinobi's kai to where it fails once used. The requirements are eye contact at least, this activates a sleeping trap genjutsu. Once kai is used by the victim it will not work the first. In order to use kai normally to break the trap will require a C-rank Kai to be used. Genjutsu users will require only a D-rank Kai to be released from the trap. In either case Kai must be used twice, once to break the trap and another to break the original genjutsu.

It s pretty much impossible, Kai is used to completly stop the flow of chakra within the body, This is how genjutsu are stopped, So if ones chakra is stopped a secondary genjutsu can't be placed on them due to the genjutsu being unable to alter and manipulate there chakra flow.
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PostSubject: Re: Bastian Bishamonten Nuitari   Tue Apr 17, 2012 12:16 pm

Done. And Removed that jutsu.
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PostSubject: Re: Bastian Bishamonten Nuitari   Tue Apr 17, 2012 7:55 pm

Name: Conquest: Shunshin no Jutsu I
Rank: D
Type: Nin/Ken
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu is an advanced version of the academy ninjutsu Shunshin. After years of studying all aspects of the jutsu, in terms of how it effects the body to cover long distances, Ginnai learned to make the jutsu affect his body as a whole. His natural reflexes and attack speed are increased depending on how much chakra he puts into the jutsu itself. Out of all the Conquest kejutsu, this is considered the strongest due to the fact it is able to combine with other jutsu making each attack faster and more deadly. The average speed of the movement easily 10% higher than average speed of one equal to the users rank.

this jutsu is like having a speed SC so remove the part about the average speed. Normal body flicker is D rank and this could be easy abused and used many time so raise the rank to B

make all your jutsu have english names as i dont know japanese all that well so english name will be easy to modd the app further

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PostSubject: Re: Bastian Bishamonten Nuitari   Tue Apr 17, 2012 9:55 pm

Endan: I'd like to know the size, speed, and damage of the fireball.
Goukyaku no Jutsu: Same as above.
Housenka no Jutsu: Same as above, and how many fireballs can it make?
Ryuuka no Jutsu: What is the speed and what kind of damage can it do?
Karyuu Endan: Size, speed, damage.
Mist Waltz: How quickly can the mist spread, and can it be dissipated?
Great Dragon Fire: How fast is it, and what is the size of the fire dragon?
Burning Ash Accumulation: How quickly can the ash spread and how much damage does the explosion cause? Can the explosion cause damage to allies or just the opponents?
Dai Endan: How fast, how large, how much damage?
Touza: Never seen this in the manga or the anime, so it's either filler or custom. What can it do if you touch a person with only one of the hands?
Kyuu: Also non-canon. Size, speed, and exact amount of damage.
Kiba Kyuu: Also non-canon. Size and speed.
Raiton Bunshin no Jutsu: This one requires Kage Bunshin no Jutsu, and you don't have it.
Raiton Doragon: Non-canon. How quickly can it move? Can it change direction mid-flight? How much is "big lightning damage"?
Raiton Engai: Non-canon. How long is the opponent stunned? Can this jutsu just be switched on and off? How powerful of a taijutsu technique is "powerful enough"?
Raiton Kago: Non-canon. How quickly can the ball rotate? How much damage does it do to the opponent? How long can you perform the technique?
Raiton Ookami: Might be considered a variant of Chidori, due to the way it is used by Kakashi. I'd rather have someone else take a closer look at the way it is used in the manga.
Senbon Hell: If it's 3 of the user's posts, it lasts six posts, and that's only if it's you and one other opponent. 20 feet above or below the ground is too large of a range for a C-rank jutsu. Can pain also release this genjutsu?
Ginnai's Judgement: Size, speed of rotation and lateral movement of the flaming hurricane is needed. The fact that the jutsu incorporates both ninjutsu and genjutsu puts this technique at A-rank, especially since the flames deal high physical damage as well as mental pain.
Hellion Flames: This genjutsu is far too powerful for C-rank. Without the use of handseals and only using eye contact, the opponent can put the opponent in a genjutsu that not only leaves them motionless, but also causes mental pain and causes the opponent to pass out in three posts if they do not use Kai. That automatically puts the genjutsu at A-rank, especially if the illusion cannot be stopped via pain, which doesn't make sense because Shikamaru managed to break his own finger to escape a genjutsu that also caused a great deal of pain.
Snare: If it's a genjutsu cast on yourself and it only puts you to sleep without causing you pain, pain itself would instantly bring you out of the illusion, thus defeating the purpose of the technique.
Mind Sweep: If the rest of your body shuts down, your brain is not having blood pumped into it, your blood is not gaining oxygen, etc. You are essentially dead in every area but your brain, and that would only be temporary with no blood and no new oxygen reaching it. This would be an instant-kill technique on a sleeping opponent or on yourself.
Kai: I don't know if Kai is one of the Academy Jutsu on this site.
False Place: How large of an object can have its appearance changed, and can it change the appearance of weapons (making projectile weapons invisible, for example)?
Mist Servant: How many illusionary clones can this technique create?
Tree Binding Death: This technique stops the opponent from moving, and is therefore impossible to stop without another person casting Kai on you. Raise to rank to A.
Journey into Black Darkness: How long can the technique last? Can it be disrupted by Kai or pain?
Grotesque Darkness: Can this be dispelled by Kai or pain? Is the opponent fully immobile during the genjutsu?
Hell Fire technique: Can this be dispelled by Kai or pain?
Temple of Nirvana: Can this also be dispelled by pain? How long is the target asleep?
Conquest: Parry and Counter: You would need at least second level of the fast speed Special Characteristic to realistically use this, and you don't have it.
Conquest: Shunshin: Using Shunshin in this manner would be a cheap way to use the speed SCs without actually having them. Denied.
Conquest: Quickdraw: Same as Conquest: Parry and Counter.
Conquest: Maelstrom: No speed increase. You currently don't have Hrunting and I assume that "chakra weapons" means weapons that are chakra-conductive.
Meat Grinder: No speed increase. How badly are the opponent's movements hindered?
Conquest: Rapid Thrust: No speed increase.
Conquest: Rock Away: No speed increase.
Conquest: Dance of Musashi: No speed increase.
Conquest: Beasts Roar: No speed increase.
Conquest: Projectile Block: No speed increase. Can this also deflect Fuuma shuriken?

And that's all the jutsu.
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PostSubject: Re: Bastian Bishamonten Nuitari   Wed Apr 18, 2012 8:33 am

Right Ill continue modding the application from here you will change what I list here if not you will be denied the rank of kage because I am sick of the bitching.

RIght

Also canon jutsu can be given a different rank if though it may have a set rank because jutsu are often edited on Narutopedia and the current rank may not be suitable acording to rp.

Name: Kyuu no Jutsu
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 5-10 meters
Element: Raiton
Description: A jutsu on which the user creates a chakra made sphere of lightning energy in his hands, and throws it to the opponent, giving him a strong electric jolt. This lightning ball will be heavy and thrown in a lateral direction. ------Change the wording in the bold part so it doesn't sound auto hitting.



Name: Kiba Kyuu no Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 10 meters
Element: Raiton
Description: The evolution of Raiton Raikyuu, this time, the sphere turns into a piercing fang when thrown at the opponent giving him not only lightning damage, but also a small piercing wound. If this jutsu hits a preexisting wound, then the opponent will experience immense pain and the muscles in that area will spasm uncontrollably for one post.------ What the evoulution of Raiton Raikyuu


Name: Raiton Doragon no Jutsu
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 10-20 meters
Element: Raiton
Description: This jutsu creates a lightning jolt in the air, from which a dragon comes out, striking at the enemy, and giving him big lightning damage. The lightning jolt will expand and appear as a portal, and then the dragon, medium in size, will conform from the portal. This jutsu will last of one post.------How fast can the dragon move and is it just the one dragon, also define the damage kill shock



Name: Raiton Bunshin no Jutsu
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: Raiton
Description: Raiton Kage Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes lightning to create a Kage Bunshin clone. Because it is a Kage Bunshin, the Raiton version shares the ability to interact with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. If the Raiton Kage Bunshin is injured, the clone will revert into its natural lightning state. Like in other Lightning Element attacks, should the target come into contact with the electricity, they will be momentarily stunned.----------------------Add the normal shadow clone technqiue in as Rain makes a big deal that you need the orginal technique to have different forms of it.


Name: Raiton Engai no Jutsu
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 6 inches around skin
Element: Raiton
Description: The user’s body is surrounded by an electric shield from the user’s, which can protect the user from Taijutsu. Any one who tries to hit him will be electrocuted and sent back. However, if the Taijutsu is powerful enough, then it can break through. Also, Hyuuga techniques can penetrate this shield. This will last for one post, due to the nature of the technique, and the user is rendered immobile.------ Is it a sphere like shield that goes around the body, or like a chakra suit lol what about wind taijutsu moves or S rank techniques for taijutsu.


Name: Raiton Kago no jutsu
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 10-15 meters
Element: Raiton
Description: First the user concentrates their chakra into a ball of lightning above their head. The ball is of moderate size, like a dodgeball. This will begin to rotate, and each successful turn, a small bar of lightning will be propelled forth in any direction the user chooses. This is very fast. This jutsu may be used for defense for it is very hard get past the bars. It also is very effective at dispersing large crowds around you.---- give it a speed also how big or how long can the bars go also can they peice skin etc









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PostSubject: Re: Bastian Bishamonten Nuitari   Wed Apr 18, 2012 8:54 am

I removed raiton and picked fuuton.

Removed My Shunshin variation jutsu and all my kenjutsu jutsu should no longer allow speed increase.
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PostSubject: Re: Bastian Bishamonten Nuitari   Thu Apr 19, 2012 9:28 am

Name: Renkuudan - Drilling Air Projectile
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 5-15 meters
Element: Fuuton
Description: Fuuton • Renkuudan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. The user inhales a large amount of air into his chest and then slams his fist into his chest to expel it. When expelled it forms concussive spherical projectiles capable of inflicting large damage.-----------------------------I Know you stated you do this with you weapon but add it on to the jutsu that you require the use of your weapon to do it okay.


Name: Tatsu no Ooshigoto - Dragon's Big Job
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 20 meters
Element: Fuuton
Description: Fuuton • Tatsu no Ooshigoto is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. Temari will swing her fan into the air, causing the sky to grow dark and stormy. These clouds will create a cutting tornado that will drop down on top of her target. This requires a fan. ------ Same with this just change the wording saves people asking you later on oh you dont have a fan blah blah ok


Name: Senpuu Hashira no Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 15 meters
Element: Fuuton
Description: This encircles the opponent with a spiral of wind, then the wind starts to rotate and is focused in rotating more and more fast. Once the opponent is imprisoned inside the spiral, the user can add projectiles, which will also encircle the opponent, effectively cutting them. That can make this jutsu deadly. This requires a fan, and will last one post.-- same with this

Name: Dai Kamaitachi - Great Cutting Whirlwind
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 15 meters
Element: Fuuton
Description: Dai Kamaitachi is a Ninjutsu technique developed by the Sand ninja Temari. Named after a mythical creature, Temari uses her fan to blow a concussive wind that is imbued with her chakra. This technique is a bigger version of the normal Kamaitachi no Jutsu, having the ability to cause a great amount of cutting damage to the nearby area. This requires a fan.
--- same as this


Name: Conquest: Projectile Block
Rank: D-C
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Description: Bastian is able to increase his speed in short moments allowing him to block or deflect projectiles, by anticipating where they are coming from, how fast they are going, and where they are headed. However, the smaller the weapon he is using the more difficult this is to do. Meaning if he is using a kunai to do this jutsu it would take a C-rank amount of chakra to perform this, however, if he is using a katana or larger it would take a d-rank amount of chakra to use this. He is able to his 3 before another chakra rank is required, meaning if 4 are thrown Tatsu can deflect all four only after putting enough chakra forth to perform this twice in a simultaneously. No hand sign required just focus.---- how short are the movements for the increase of speed for, make it pure C rank i think is more suitable as well.


Name: Death's Shroud
Fused Element: N/A
Appearance: The armour is fairly bulky in large, but it is also chakra infused and it has the ability to weigh nothing at all despite it being extremely durable, being able to easily deflect away simpl projectiles with ease. The armour covers all of his body and even comes with an helmet, though it is rarely worn unless the situation calls for it. The armour is black which is yet another symbol that shows who this person is since Bastian is renowned for his black armour. The armour is considered to be very powerful only because it is able to lesson the damage from elemental based attacks by 20% than what the jutsu would normally do. Only able to be worn with those with Tank Lv 3 only.
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Rank: S-Rank
Special Abilities:
Origin: A armour created by Sebastian Nuitari, Bastian's father, in order to commemorate his son becoming the first Kazankage. The armour itself serves as his badge of position as it has the village symbol and the symbol of the Nuitari on the back parallel to each other on the upper half of the armour.


I am fine with armour but the tank sc make you take less damage to start with then there blocking allportectiles on top of this, plus element damage reduction thats 50 percent from the tank sc and the armour that about thick ness or armour it has to weigh something and no have any drawbacks to it at all.


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PostSubject: Re: Bastian Bishamonten Nuitari   Thu Apr 19, 2012 9:46 am

Perfect apart from the custom genjutsu

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PostSubject: Re: Bastian Bishamonten Nuitari   Thu Apr 19, 2012 11:45 am

custom genjutsu checked

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PostSubject: Re: Bastian Bishamonten Nuitari   Tue Apr 24, 2012 7:19 am

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PostSubject: Re: Bastian Bishamonten Nuitari   Tue Apr 24, 2012 2:12 pm

There are no more Sc's. Remove that portion and you should be fine.
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PostSubject: Re: Bastian Bishamonten Nuitari   Tue Apr 24, 2012 2:55 pm

Done
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PostSubject: Re: Bastian Bishamonten Nuitari   Tue Apr 24, 2012 3:12 pm

Approved ^-^
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PostSubject: Re: Bastian Bishamonten Nuitari   Fri Jun 08, 2012 11:36 am

check your app for stamina and chakra

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