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All have been laid to rest, all expect memories. Throughout the years, shinobi - men and women - have learned how to preserve the memories of thousand of great shinobi that have lived, and then have passed. Though, they never managed to gain the memories of Uzumaki Naruto, Haruno Sakura, and Uchiha Sasuke. These three ninjas are wildly known as the Three Heroes of the world. They are the mirror images of their legendary Sannin teachers, and touched everyone's life in some sort of way. Their memory though has been scattered across the world, and the pieces of their chakra find themselves locked away in certain men and women, wildly known as the Kages of today. They are the shadows and guardians of today's new era, and they seem to wait for something to happen. They await for Madara Uchiha to return, the Fourth Shinobi War had been created by none ever than Obito Uchiha, Kakashi's old friend whom he thought had died. In this war, numerous men and women died trying to protect all that they thought was right and true, in the end - Naruto, Sakura and Sasuke had perished by giving up their lives to kill Madara and Obito Uchiha. Their chakra awoken a sleeping God, whom took the combined power of the ten bijuu, kurama and the eight tailed bijuu's life source and basically recreated life anew. These memories however, are gone, and cannot be recreated or found in any memory book, or even in text. This story is being told through the combined chakra fragments of the Legendary Heroes that each Kage takes upon their death and inserts into a crystal fragment. However, life as everyone now knows, is finally changing. Kazengakure and Hyozangakure had finally came to an agreement of forming a grand alliance between their villages, rumored that they were related by distant cousins, this alliance would be greater than any had ever seen. The day of the treaty being signed, and thus the festival on the island of Heiwa, a new danger had awaken that day. The Sage of Six Paths was unable to keep a dark entity in slumber from the grave and beyond; a new five tailed bijuu - the Hydra - had awoken. In a fit of rage and unknown, the Hydra destroyed half of the festival grounds, killing more than five thousand civilians and shinobi alike. The Bijuu set it's eyes on the building where the witnessing six kages were located, and destroyed the entire building. Three months had passed, and Sannins of each village filled the spots of the Kages, as many hoped that one day there would be news that someone had survived the attack. Only the Hyozangakure's kage had returned, apparently unaware of what happened. Because of this, many of the villages have returned hostile towards each other, many blaming Hyozengakure for the attack that killed each of the Kage's. Slowly, men and women of each village are elected to fill the Kage spots of each of the village, alliances are being forged and mended. But can anyone form a great alliance to take down Hydria, and once again, scatter all of the tailed beasts across the world?

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"I will make you disappear!"


    Name: Hakai
    Middle: NONE
    Surname: Inuzuka
    Age: 24
    Gender: Male
    Sexual Orientation: STRAIGHT (why is this important in an app?>?)

    Overall Appearance: Hakai is six foot, five inches and just under two hundred and twenty-five pounds. He is a a tall man, and rather built. He has a very tone skin and is completely covered chiseled in muscles. He is in no way buff, but has a strong slim build. He isn't rippling with massive muscles and doesn't have much bulk. But despite this he is well built, with broad shoulders and strong limbs. His body is perfectly textured as he is a work out maniac. Hakai has auburn dark brown hair with a long pony tail that hangs down his back wildly. The rest of his hair also dangle wildly and is tussled around everywhere. He has piercing animal brown eyes, that are bright and can be seen clearly by all. They have a cannibalistic shine to them as they are vertically slanted, like a wild animal.

    His skin is not bare however, its covered in 100s of ink tattoos, from his back to chest, wrists, hands, feet, and even in his mouth. They are each a unique seal that Hakai sealed upon his body. They are on every inch of his body, he uses them from his unique weaponry style. If he uses up the sealed items for one of his tattoos he can simply reseal more items in the permanent seals on his body. Though have seals on his back or other areas don't make sense to most, he has a unique fighting style using his projectile mastery in unison with his other techniques.

    Hakai is tan from spending much of his days in the sun, very little clothes if any. He often sun baths on top of the Mizukage Mansion, simply because he can. He is almost always seen without a shirt on and in a pair of shorts; but no matter what clothes he is wearing he is seen with Samehada on his back. Even when he goes swimming or surfing he can be seen with Samehada on his back. He never wears his official jounin uniform around the village. He normally wears a self made robe around the village with the words "Big Pimp'in" on the back; always wears nothing but short or underwear beneath it. Still remaining shirtless most of the time. Hakai normally walks barefoot everywhere, even to important meetings. But in battle he is seen in his full uniform. *character picture* As with his personality his clothing attire changes based on what he is doing. If need he will wear full battle uniform.


    Overall Personality: Hakai is laid back and carefree for the most part. He always has a jovial behavior even in fights or battles. He is also very charismatic and avert to praising other, including enemies or other people not from his village. He believe any extraordinary jutsu or ability deserves praise and honor. He is a kind man and believes the best in people. He even gets excited if an opponents has great skill or does a powerful attack. But for the most part Hakai just swims in the ocean and goes surfing. He doesn't care for work. He is a carefree elite ninja, and is best described as a beach bum.

    But despite these positive behaviors Hakai has a serious side. He has strong concern for the people of his friends and his family. He hates the thought have having to battle his fellow allied ninja. But if they to turn against him he would have no hesitation in killing them. Anyone who endangers his clan and the people of it, will be his enemies. He remembers enemies for life if you get on his bad side, there is no chance of getting off of it. He dislikes people who are always series, or are over cocky in their power. He believe that you should never brag, but let you abilities and skills speak for themselves.

    On top of his serious side Hakai is a completely different person in battle. He can be describe as a relentless demon, ruthless and cunning in his battle strategies. In war young teens and experienced adults are blurred to him. It is all based on the headband and the side they fight on. He will slay an enemy without a second thought or a single thought of mercy. Because of his war experience and his ability to be a perfect shinobi. Which is why outside of battle he takes such a relaxed approach to life. For Hakai knows all to well that the ninja world cannot have peace forever. He is always read to step up when his village and country needs him.

    likes: fighting, canines, swords, power, friends, meat
    Dislikes: Akatsuki, vegetarians, vegetables, cowards, cockiness
    Catch Phrase: Congratulations..... Now I am going to kill you.





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"Sad thing is, they weren't very important when starting out.."


    Village: Hidden Hidden in the Mist
    Rank: Akatsuki S rank Missing Ninja
    Bloodline: Inuzuka Clan
    Elements: Lightning, Water, and Earth
    Specialization: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, Weaponry





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"He was from a rare family, I don't think they exist."


    Name: Inuzuka
    Clan Type: Shinobi

    Kekkei Genkai: None
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    Clan Element: none
    Clan History: The Inuzuka clan (犬塚一族, Inuzuka Ichizoku) or Inuzuka family (犬塚家, Inuzuka-ke) is known for their use of ninken as fighting companions and are easily identified by the distinctive red fang markings on their cheeks. They were once prominent in the LEAF village, when Marada took over the world their clan leader join his forces.

    The members are also given their own canine partner(s) when they reach a certain age. Thereafter, the shinobi and their dog(s) are practically inseparable. It would seem that due to the bond between an Inuzuka and their canine partner(s), their chakra is allowed to mix, and is shared between them, adding a feral appearance to the human partners, and makes a bond between them that affords them the use of the clan's collaboration jutsu, such as the Fang Passing Fang. The clan members are also able to communicating with canines even if unlike Kuromaru, the dogs cannot talk.





P A S S E D & L E A R N E D

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"He was strong, weapon and jutsu wise. Right?"

Elemental Jutsu[s]




    [color]Earth Jutsu[/color]
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    Water Jutsu
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    [Lightning jutsu
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Non-Elemental Jutsu[s]




    Non-elemental jutsu
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    Weaponry Techniques
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W E A P O N





    Hakai's Body
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    Hakai's Black Umbrellas and Demon Umbrella
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    Random Equipment
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[SC] SPECIAL CHARACTERISTICS.
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[SC] TRAITS.
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N O T . F O R G O T T E N


"Dad. You grew up with them, right? Mind telling me their story?"

    Birth Date: Winter
    Home Village/Current: Akatsuki
    Parents: Deceased
    Siblings: MIA
    Sensei / Role Model: Father: Deceased Previous Mizukage deceased
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Omg... Weeks and now this... No I don't realize that lol.

The rules say kkgs clans are allow. Example head admins application had both LRA And. KKG. Her new app has a keg and a limited technique as well, so it doesn't make any sense that I can't use clan techniques which require no biological capabilities only to be taught them and sage mode. Certainly when my sage mode is practicallly based of inzuzka clan, as it requires an animal part to be achieved not just holding still. On iPad... So if there are typos... My bad
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Your specialisations dont add up to your clan

Specialisations = Ninjutsu Weaponry Medical Ninjutsu

Clan jutsu = Taijutsu and Nintaijutsu

You don't have the specs to use your clan techniques
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fixed please look at app.. I posted in the banned/limited items to change from sage mode to LRA since its open now. If its approved it is only one change, so please continue to look over the application.
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Hakai using his medical knowledge has alter is body beyond that of normal inuzukas. His nails are as strong as titanium and able to slice through stone or standard ninja weapons, his teeth are equally strong. His senses are enhanced and he has super hearing and smell. Beyond that of any normal Inuzuka, when he enter sage mode they are even further enhanced.

something like this would require medical


Name: Kuchiyose • Raikou Kenka - Summoning • Lightning Blade Creation
Rank: B
Type: Weaponry
Element: N/A
Description: The ninja tools can be summoned in an instant just by touching the sealing "marks" which can be drawn anywhere. The ninja tools are thrown with the actual speed of a "flash of lightning", ruining the opponent's outset of the battle, and snatching away the initiative. Furthermore, because the summonable ninja tools can remain hidden until right before they are used, if this technique is mastered, there are an exceptional number of possible tactics. A large number of ninja tools can be stored within the sealing marks, which can make the efficiency of this technique last longer. Hakai uses 100s of seals all over his body to summon countless ninja projectiles.

requires fuin


Name: Silent Homicide Killing technique
Rank: S
Type: Physical
Description: (Use Kenjutsu or weaponry) (Must be from the Mist Village)
No noise, until the sound of a body falling is how a master of the silent killing technique fights. This technique is simply a very quiet method of killing an opponent, usually from behind with a blade. The user will often slit their opponent's throat, preventing any cry that might give them away. The Seven Ninja Swordsmen of the Mist are said to be masters of this technique, and were even good enough to track and kill opponents through sound alone. As a master of this technique you are able to move without any noise, or vibration on the ground. You rival a ghost in movement and when cover is provided, you are at your deadliest. You are a silent killer and a master at this killing art.

This is not a jutsu but used here as a Sc which requires stages on top of that only kenjutsu users are allowed this, Aswell as this due to it being s-rank and an assasination technique it will require the three assassination techs we have here on the site
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PostSubject: Re: HaKai Inuzuka - Wolf Sage   HaKai Inuzuka - Wolf Sage - Page 2 Icon_minitimeWed Apr 18, 2012 7:29 pm

Will change everything except...

Name: Kuchiyose • Raikou Kenka - Summoning • Lightning Blade Creation
Rank: B
Type: Weaponry
Element: N/A
Description: The ninja tools can be summoned in an instant just by touching the sealing "marks" which can be drawn anywhere. The ninja tools are thrown with the actual speed of a "flash of lightning", ruining the opponent's outset of the battle, and snatching away the initiative. Furthermore, because the summonable ninja tools can remain hidden until right before they are used, if this technique is mastered, there are an exceptional number of possible tactics. A large number of ninja tools can be stored within the sealing marks, which can make the efficiency of this technique last longer. Hakai uses 100s of seals all over his body to summon countless ninja projectiles.

Its a weaponry technique, the sealing of weapons is weaponry. Fuin jutsu is in fact sealing technqiues, but this is not a specialty jutsu. If fall under just weaponry, it is basically an advanced form of the genin techniques seen with tenten. Also this technique isn't actually the seal, it is just using presealed items. Thus these seal could easy be gained in the oinja world as simple as kunai or a scroll of kunai. Which is why it fall under weaponry and I employ you to reconsider.
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PostSubject: Re: HaKai Inuzuka - Wolf Sage   HaKai Inuzuka - Wolf Sage - Page 2 Icon_minitimeThu Apr 19, 2012 9:01 am

I'm sorry for the wait, Hakai. I've brought your app to the the forefront. Now, onto some admin-like things :3


Name: Kuchiyose • Raikou Kenka - Summoning • Lightning Blade Creation
Rank: B
Type: Weaponry
Element: N/A
Description: The ninja tools can be summoned in an instant just by touching the sealing "marks" which can be drawn anywhere. The ninja tools are thrown with the actual speed of a "flash of lightning", ruining the opponent's outset of the battle, and snatching away the initiative. Furthermore, because the summonable ninja tools can remain hidden until right before they are used, if this technique is mastered, there are an exceptional number of possible tactics. A large number of ninja tools can be stored within the sealing marks, which can make the efficiency of this technique last longer. Hakai uses 100s of seals all over his body to summon countless ninja projectiles.

Myself, along with some other people have discussed this jutsu. The fact that you state "Hakai uses 100s of seals all over his body to summon countless ninja projectiles," makes it too OP. Our take on it is, it isn't fair for someone with a specialization in Fuinjutsu when this jutsu can only take place through SUMMONING, which is not the main point of weaponry. In addition, this jutsu is seen as being sealed on objects, such as cloth and what not. But, making an exception, you, being a person, are an object as well. Here's my advice: You should remove the 100 seals portion and state how many tools and which tools are sealed within the seals, within reason.


Another thing that was pointed out is the fact that you have Akatsuki and a Samehada. You cannot have both, unfortunately. If you choose the akatsuki, you will have to change the portion of your app that states, "Hakai has a single umbrella on his waist, sometime he will store it inside of Samehada so to be used for a surprise attack. The only other weapon on his that he doesn't summon is Samehada." And if you want the Samehada, you must originate from Kiri.

Also, I've counted that you have exceeded the number of jutsus allowed for your rank. S-ranked shinobi are granted 27 A and lower jutsus and 3 S rank jutsus respectively.

Change those things, in addition to the things you agreed to changing in Jay's post above and this app will be looked at again.

Sorry for such the long wait! v.v
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Oh lol XD Samehada isn't suppose to be on this app. The problem I have is that 90% of all my character used Samehada, so it is inside countless of my jutsu and descriptions. Mainly because I am so use to having a character that uses it. But on this site I wasn't intended to use Samehada. Also the seals all over his body is from a different app, where I made a S rank pure weaponry user. Basically a grown up S rank version of what Tenten would be if she became a bad ass. So I will remove that stuff its just from other apps. Sorry.
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That's no problem ^-^ Bump it when you're finished and I'll look at it again.
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