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PostSubject: Aiden Tetsujin   Sat Mar 24, 2012 10:07 am





"My grandfather told me of a very special person."


    Name: Aiden
    Middle: James
    Surname: Tetsujin
    Age: 19
    Gender: Male
    Sexual Orientation: Straight

    Overall Appearance: Aiden’s hair goes from short to long frizzy white hair. He is extremely attractive with nice broad shoulders and a gorgeous smile. He also has flawless skin and his eye color is known to always change. Sometimes its due to lighting but he can go from having dark brown eyes to green eyes in a day. He has really thin eye brows and a normal sized nose. He stands 6' 2” tall and weighs 160 pounds. He was a great build to his body and is a very toned.

    Overall Persona: Aiden Hitake, a fresh -faced – nineteen year old teenager, whom spends most of his time alone or training. He is often found reading books on topics such as chemistry, spiritual science, and Theory/Philosophy. Apart from his love of knowledge, he is more of an opportunist when it comes to things that centers on, “Becoming Powerful”. This normally would be a positive thing but the people who know of Aiden’s past know how being “Opportunistic” has leaded him to doing questionable things. Things such as the death of his child hood best friend, Zaseraf, whom was killed by a village officer, two days after being accused of stealing a sacred sword from the village grave of legends. People who knew Zaseraf and Aiden believed that Zaseraf, was not a man of trouble, and that Aiden was possibly the person who stole the sacred sword. This gave Aiden his infamous reputation as the Bringer of Mischeif. This also made Aiden a prime suspect in result making Kirigakure no home for the young Aiden. His opportunistic actions have lead people, such as his late father, Kigoshi Hitake to question, his mental health. Other than the questionable actions in his past, Aiden seems to be like most teenage boys his age, and just like most of the boys around his area, he has grown a strong attraction to females and finds himself at times being randomly perverted, although he is quieter about it than others. Overall Aiden is a very ambitious person and has a great future, wherever he may end up.
    Divine Voice: He is known to have the most beautiful male voice in the world. He can be found singing on his spare time, but what is most remarkable about his voice is his vocal range, and how loud he can project when he wants to. Rumor has it that sometimes his voice can be heard clearly over 100 meters away.
    Hyper Observation/ Information Hording: Being as mischievous as he is, Aiden had to teach himself a few skills such as being able to retain and gather a lot of information in a short period of time. Part of being able to do this comes from Aiden’s incredible talent for spotting the smallest, yet most important details in various situations. Aiden has been known to be able to gather all the information in a text book by just skimming through every page, and to be able to spot a needle in a hay stake.
    Trouble Maker: Maybe it’s because of the way he was as a kid, but there is just something about the way he carries himself and the look on his face that makes others believe that he is always up to no good. He tends to always get blamed for anything that goes wrong, even though it has nothing to do with him. The only time this disadvantage fails is if someone was with him at the time and proves his innocence, other than that he is usually the one that is blamed.

    Blood Lust/ Mischief: This is what has become of Aiden during his years in kirigakure. Aiden growing up with people blaming him for many things that goes wrong, and his natural tendency to do things just to cure his boredom, he has developed a bad habit, and psychological tick. This was generally what his father, Kigoshi was worried about. Aiden would get random urges to go on an uncontrollable killing rampage. People have been known to be able to trigger this zone in which Aiden falls into, but nonetheless Aiden keeps himself from going through with it, by doing what he does best, which is cause mischief.

    Phenomenal Acrobat: Aiden has a amazing skills when it comes to acrobatics. He can use his acrobatic skills to maneuver and escape touch situations. This characteristic helps with style and movement, in which Aiden excels

    Fears: Falling in love
    Likes: Rootbeer, Women, Science, Power, Jutsus, Training, Fighting, and Missions
    Dislikes: Bullies, Mercenaries, and Whores
    Catch Phrase: “Tear You to Pieces”, “Finish Strong”, “Born Better”, “Born to Live, Live to Die”





I.D. U N K N O W N



"Sad thing is, they weren't very important when starting out.."


    Village: Hyozangakure
    Rank: A
    Bloodline: Tetsujin
    Elements: Blue Blade Power (variations), Raiton, Doton
    Specialization: Ninjutsu, Fuuinjutsu, Weapons
    Beginning Chakra: 265
    Beginning Stamina: 215



Updated Statistics:

    Village: Hyozangakure
    Rank: Ex Anbu Leader/ Missing Nin
    Bloodline: Tetsujin
    Elements: Blue Blade Power (variations), Raiton, Fuuton, Doton
    Specialization: Ninjutsu, Fuuinjutsu, Weapons
    Updated Chakra: 345
    Updated Stamina: 295




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B L O O D . T Y P E



"He was from a rare family, I don't think they exist."



[list]Name: Tetsujin
Clan Type: Shinobi
Kekkei Genkai: Ha no me, Aoi burēdo• mūn, Kyūkyoku no burūburēdo-me
Clan Element: Blue Blade Power(variations)
Clan History:
The Tetsujin Clan
Long ago, during the war for civilization, two tribes went head to head for territory. One tribe was known to be masters in the art of swordsmanship and the other as masters in the art of stealth. They were the samurais and ninjas of the time, and though one side would end up winning, they would quickly find themselves in desperate need of supplies and food, which would cause a turn of tables. This back and forth between the clans caused a lot of casualties from both sides. To end the feud which would ultimately destroy both clans, the leaders of each clan would come to agreements to co-exist as equals. Upon their agreement they forged academies and shared each other’s tactics. Everything was quiet and the people lived together just fine. They would procreate and make the most interesting warriors. Up until the day a meteor smashed into their mountains, causing a two day earthquake. By the end of the quake the leaders agreed to retrieve the meteor. They would soon discover that this meteor was a source of a powerful blue chakra which eliminated a small percentage of their forces. Upon seizing the power, they sealed it within itself and attempted to cut pieces of it and surgically implant them into the chest of their strongest members. After being successful they used seals in order to tap into the power of the meteor shards within them. This gave them great power and mystery, but as time passed the warriors had to transplant the meteor to their children, who in result of their parent’s being hosts for the meteors would be born with meteor power already. This continued until they each started to bared multiple children . This clan became a powerful family but eventually the meteors began to die out and unfortunately so did the hosts. Fortunately the power of the meteors became embedded within the newer generation and with it , a new found power, Blue Blade Power.




P A S S E D & L E A R N E D



"He was strong, weapon and jutsu wise. Right?"

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Elemental Jutsu[s]



Limited: Riki, Chidori & Variations

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Academy Jutsus:

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Han no me + Jutsus

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Aoi burēdo• mūn + (jutsus)

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Kyūkyoku no burūburēdo-me Jutsus

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[SC] TRAITS.

The Skilled Learner: The Formidable:You have practiced so freaking much its not funny. You have complete understanding of how to not overcompensate with how much your body does and when it gets sore, you're able to recover a bit faster. Your chakra is also very controlled as well and with that 50% word count decrease for training.
Interrogator: Mind Torturer: Your torturing techniques are rather improved. You can make the mildest of of strong wills to break and you are able to get the information you need to get by. It's a large step ahead when you know how the mind words and your beginning to understand the psychology of interpersonal and intrapersonal attributes of the human mind. The torture skills are still increasing and you are beginning to try new tricks
Safe House: The Underground Conductor: You're beginning to find better and more suitable spots to hide criminals. They are less obvious and of course, hidden away from the public. You have knowledge of hiding in plain sight but you don't test that out yet, you're still a long ways ahead before pulling off that kind of stunt. Those who try to track the criminals have a harder time tracking.

You'll find the traits here. [here]




N O T . F O R G O T T E N


"Dad. You grew up with them, right? Mind telling me their story?"

    Birth Date: Winter
    Home Village/Current: Hyozangakure
    Parents: ?????
    Siblings: 2
    Sensei / Role Model: (Chunin and Above)
    History:
    Genin Arc

    Tetsujin clan members are descendants from two proud families from two proud countries. The Tetsujin clan is the product of a farmer boy for the royal family of Spain named Heusen and a high ranked shinobi of the Blazing Moon clan, Yuzuki . Yuzuki bore Heusen a child that they named, Kigoshi Tetsujin, whom would then go on to having three children of his own. The oldest he called Aiden James Tetsujin. Aiden grew up with the love of his mother and father, and by age four, he already had two younger brothers, one by the name of Kaizo, and the final brother was named Enoshi. At his young age, Aiden began to show much interest in spiritual energy and the concept on how spiritual energy just like natural energy cannot be destroyed, only transformed. These fascinations with the arts lead to Aiden training under a local clan member, Jaithen along with attending Sakaigakure’s shinobi academy at an early age and unlocked the first stage of his clan eyes.

    By age six, Aiden had already completed his second year at the academy, making his mother and father very proud. While in school Aiden’s training with Jaithen was going exceptionally well, though he could not yet master every single technique thrown at him, he was able to break down and understand the clan techniques taught to him and come up with ways to make them better. It became clear to Jaithen that information gathering and comprehend was a beautiful talent that Aiden had possessed. Jaithen would show and explain high ranked techniques to Aiden and have him analyze them, and think of ways to improve upon them. Aiden’s parents never really understood where Jaithen’s school was located, but Aiden always told them that not assigning one place as the training area gives the student a sense of freedom, and incentive to train and grow, no matter what the location maybe. So under that idea Jaithen’s school didn’t have a specific location but training sessions took place in random parts of the mist village. Although these locations didn’t sound too appealing to the wealthier members of the clan, the training was exceptional and it showed in the amount of successful students Jaithen had. There Aiden made many friends, and met a young girl around his age named Sonya. Sonya like most girls was very intelligent and focused on her craft, while Aiden on the other hand had developed a knack for getting in trouble to cure his boredom. At first it started as just innocent fun such as cherry bombs in the school’s bathrooms to causing food fights. He then graduated the academy with his friends and became the first genin of the three brothers and unlocked the second stage of his clan's eyes.

    Chuunin Arc
    Shortly after graduating from the academy, Aiden’s brothers became Genins as well. Aiden’s relationship was a good one, and for a while was a great example to them. As a genin, Aiden was assigned to a jounin from the village, named Kentoshi . Although Aiden had not stopped training with Jaithen , he found it extremely difficult to keep up with Kentoshi’s teachings, yet meet Kentoshi’s expectations. Under the supervision of Kentoshi , Aiden began his training in Weapons. Aiden found this aspect to be very interesting, and shortly learned to combine jutsus with his weaponry skill. Aiden had trained hard with Jaithen and Kentoshi until he has completed all that they had to teach him for his rank. He continued training under both masters until the age of 14 where he would then sign up for the chuunin exams. Aiden survived the first two rounds of the chuunin exams but then lost to one of the other genins by the name of Zaseraf. Since he had gotten as far as the second round he was still promoted to Chuunin but Zaseraf got promoted to jounin. After the exams Zaseraf and Aiden became close friends, but this would prove to be a bad partnership for Zaseraf. Aiden started to get into a lot of trouble and a lot of fights, followed by many reports for breaking and entering. Zaseraf became a highly respected jounin in the village, and because of him, Aiden was shown mercy by the villagers and his peers alike. Aiden’s best friend Zaseraf later became the apprentice of the village voodoo priestess, Danka whom became a personal errand girl for the kage. Aiden and Zaseraf’s friendship gradually flourished as the two began to take missions together, and even occasionally take part in some mischievous activities.

    Jounin/Anbu Arch

    Three years later, Aiden’s relationship with his brothers have weakened due to him being away on missions. His two other brothers had become chuunins at this time and had been away on missions as well. Aiden and his parent ended up spending time together but his father quickly started to lose admiration for Aiden’s hard works. Aiden ended up going through the whole phase of attempting to gain his father’s approval, but no matter how hard Aiden tried, there was always something to criticize in the eyes of his father. Two years later, Aiden gets arrested after losing control of himself on a battle field and this causes his father to think that Aiden has completely lost his mind. Eventually he was let out and became hell bent on becoming the Sukaikage. He trained hard along side of Zaseraf, and registered for the Jounin exams. Zaseraf and Aiden performed well in the exams but just like last time, Aiden lost to Zaseraf in the final round. It took some serious consideration before the Sukaikage had allowed Aiden to become a jounin. Aiden began to become a bit impatient with his training, and then one day Zaseraf’s master was reported dead. Only Zaseraf and the Sukaikage were allowed to attend her funeral. She laid there lifeless in her casket and along with her was sword. This was supposed to be a secret kept from everyone except for Zaseraf and the Sukaikage, but Zaseraf told Aiden everything. Zaseraf had no idea that Aiden would actually attempt to break into the heavily guarded cemetery and take the sword from her casket. After taking the blade, Aiden hid it from Zaseraf and shortly after Zaseraf was visited by the village guards. Aiden and the entire village witnessed as Zaseraf being publically beaten and interrogated for the sword. Zaseraf said nothing although he had a good idea on who might have taken the blade. Zaseraf was beaten and interrogated until he finally stood up for himself, but by this time he was too late, he had taken quite a beating and could not fight them off himself. Aiden watched as his best friend was killed . Aiden had never thought that they would actually kill him and when they did he retreated back to his house. People who knew Zaseraf and Aiden believed that Zaseraf, was not a man of trouble, and that Aiden was possibly the person who stole the sacred sword. This gave Aiden his infamous reputation as the Bringer of Mischief. This also made Aiden a prime suspect in result making Kirigakure no home for the young Aiden. His opportunistic actions have lead people, such as his late father, Kigoshi Hitake to question, his mental health. The Sukaikage had Aiden and his family put under investigation, and once Aiden found out he escaped the village and headed for the iceberg village along with the sacred blade; to become a member of their anbu and unlocked the third stage of his clan's eyes.

    RP Sample:
    Aeneas was ready to go and was awaiting the approval from tenzou but before he can even get a response from tenzou the kanetsukage responded with an insane outburst at his own ally. This completely diffused some of Aeneas’s anger and had Aeneas listening to what is actually going on instead of his own conflicts. He heard takeshi’s words and was surprised that instead of the fall of kazangakure , takeshi actually felt the same way about Dominic doing what he did for himself. Aeneas then heard Takeshi speak of the gods. Now Aeneas believes in spirituality but he isn’t quite familiar with the gods, but he found it interesting that these so called Gods told takeshi to protect Aeneas.

    As he heard this Aeneas’s anger was completely gone as it then became uncertainty. Aeneas didn’t want to accept this but suddenly he began to think back to a dream that remains so clear in his mind, the dream he had right before he traveled here to Hyougagakure. It wasn’t until the kanetsukage walked up to him while he was in his state of weakness and told him that (None was as lucky as him). As he heard those words he looked at dominic who didn’t even draw his swords and wrinkles his nose in anger. Takeshi then apologized for Aeneas as if Aeneas was some child. Aeneas turned and walks close to the door then turned back around. “No disrespect to you Takeshi, but I don’t believe in gods. But if they are real then they clearly don’t know me very well, because if they did they would know that no one tells me what my fate is because I am the script writer of my own god damn life.”

    Aeneas was thinking of seriously leaving the room until Tenzou decided to speak with him directly, saying that he does not care about Kazangakure, or Nadaregakure . Tenzou’s blamed this on Aeneas’s negligence to inform him of his actions before making them. Tenzou even ventured to say that he didn’t care about anyone’s village which is why he is setting this meeting. Aeneas took what he said to heart and looked at Tenzou with the most disappointing look. Aeneas had thought that he was in this village because Tenzou had forgiven his little mistake, but it seems that he never will and quite frankly Aeneas could now careless for forgiveness. Aeneas just looks at tenzou until he was done with all he had to say. Aeneas ‘s blood enchanted eyes faded and Aeneas’s look of disappointed became a look of hopelessness.

    Aeneas sheathes his weapons and began to make his way to the table as he picks up the mask part of his outfit and removes his mask of hakushin to place it back on, then covers the remainder of his face with the mask of hakushin. Aeneas looks at dominic as he said to Aeneas, (It’s Your Lucky Day Kid). Aeneas suked his teeth and sat down, “If I were a lucky man, the white of my costume would have been red and you would be no longer breathing.” Aeneas is completely disappointed, “ I don’t believe in Takeshi’s prophecies nor do I need or want his protection. If there is a chance that in this meeting the war can be called off, then I can not for the sake of my villagers not hear it out. But rest assure, war or no war your life is mine to take, Dominic Edricks.” Aeneas beginning to reach a constant level were he is still very on edge but in control of his thirst to fight. Aeneas now directs his attention to takeshi, “ I have no vendetta towards you or your men, and quite frankly I rather not pose any harm to any of your villages, all I want is dominic’s life. The life of the man you call brother. Although it brings me pain when I imagine the position you are in, I will kill the man you call brother wither I have to take you out as well, and for that I apologize to you. “ Aeneas keeps focus on takeshi but his eyes looks at takeshi’s weapon Raijin and senses that takeshi does not have any desire to deceive him . Aeneas continues, “ You have convinced me that there is a greater purpose, and hopefully this new divine brings peace through the nation.” Aeneas then turns his attention to Tenzou, “ You know long before I met the Atsusakage I use to respect you. But I was still new to the leadership role and I wanted to help as much as I can to prevent a mass killing. I messed up, because I did not think of you or what you would feel about the alliance right away, but my actions were not selfish. I came to you to inform you, but before I could finish what ive been trying to say, you attempted to take my life Tenzou. And to be honest, I never regretted what I did, and I don’t feel ashamed of how I did it either, I just know that it could have been better. I understand that you may not like Kazangakure, but it seems like im the only one here who cares, and that alone is pathetic. You guys are happy that a whole village was completely brought down to extinction and you guys sit there and look down on me, and my village. You judge me and see my actions as irrational. We cant be anything until we learn to understand each other, but no one here understands agony. No one gets what it is to lose, and to keep losing time and time again. It is simply life straining but you wont get it, and more interestingly you will never care.”

    Aeneas looks at the table and keeps his eyes ficed on the center but his focus still about the room. “ I’m lucky? …..because im alive? Now what is that worth. “ It seems like Aeneas has fallen into a trans of his own words as he speaks to the group, “ Granted I want to live, because I live through the spirit of every Nadaregakurian that is ready to fight and holds strong in pride for their nation. And they live through me, my words and my actions can effect their lives and their future, and by that I understand what it means to be a kage, and they understand what it means to be Nadaregakurian.My villagers and I came to this village for the exams, and I was okay with this thinking that Tenzou and I could put passed that incident an emphasize for peace, but now I understand, your words.” Aeneas smiles a bit but this smile isn’t sincere it seems more of a depressing smile as he thinks back of his talks with haru and his visits to kazangakure before the incident and begins once more, “ I see that ive said way..way to much , but before I completely disconnect id like to say, fuck you Tenzou , you force us to remain civil towards this bullshit knowing full well that in this village you are god, but never would you venture to speak to me like that in anywhere else you coward.

    Don’t ever judge me because I may talk too much and I may whine even more but I take a stand and plant my feet down like a man and back every word I say, while you hide behind you r ice and mirrors and try to tell me about how to co-exist? Where the hell were you for a year and a half, I haven’t seen you step foot in my village ever, and I doubt anyone else can say otherwise. You want to talk about world peace well then quit sitting there and open your damn mouth and tell me a little something about how the world should be, tell me what you know about political affairs? You sit there completely oblivious to the fact that we are the voice of the nations. How are we going to fix the shit when the voice of Hyougagakure just told the face of Nadaregakure, that they don’t give a shit about our lost, or our village?” Aeneas speaks not expecting anyone to really understand him but he is nearly ready to stay quite as he decides to finish what he started with dominic. “ If there truly are gods then they have greater plans for us, and I want to see it through. But I will never forgive you, so I will take every chance I can get to beat the living shit out of you until the day comes that I decide to take your life. But I wont wait very long to fight you, so im proposing a sparring match right after this meeting is over. The Umikage vs The Takekage, until one of us is standing, and we’ll do it outside of hyougagakure.” Aeneas sits there and stays quite awaiting an answer and allowing others to start speaking of this so called plan for the nations to co-exist.



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PostSubject: Re: Aiden Tetsujin   Sat Mar 24, 2012 1:24 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Aiden Tetsujin   Sat Apr 28, 2012 4:34 pm

Anyone have any problems with the Snake Sword?

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PostSubject: Re: Aiden Tetsujin   Sat Apr 28, 2012 9:00 pm


Jutsu Name: Ao āchā : Blue Archer
Rank: C
Element: ----
Type: KKG
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Users with at least the first stage of their trade mark eyes can use this technique. Once the user completes the hand signs needed for this technique, a seal will appear in the center of their chest. This black seal will remain inactive for one post after the hand seals are completed. On the second post that the hand seals are completed the user’s seal will glow blue. The user will then be able to release the seal, and in result cause blue chakra to surge through them and change their entire outfit and some of their appearance. When this technique is in full effect, the user will be wearing a decorative white and blue archer outfit (based on the design that the user prefers) and their hair will become white. This form allows the users reflexes and action rate to double its current state, as well as allow the user to use his/her chakra to form a bow and arrows made of pure chakra. When used the arrows can travel up to 60 meters , pierce through wood like butter, and travel at 25mph. In order to maintain this form the user must have the clan’s trademark eyes activated, if deactivated this form is cancelled. This technique has a cool down of 8 posts and lasts as long as the user has the eyes activated.


I don't believe this would be a C-rank. Yes it has some drawbacks, but for your reflexes and what not are doubled and then you form a bow AND arrows made of chakra, that's too much stuff going on for C-rank only. Bump it to a B and keep the cool down.

As for the sword, it is in no way a D-ranked sword, I only see it as S-ranked. Unless you mention what it can do at each rank then just state it is s-ranked. Considering you are applying for A-ranked, you can make it A-S ranked, but for A-rank, maybe make it a bit less powerful or describe what becomes more powerful when you become S-rank.

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PostSubject: Re: Aiden Tetsujin   Sun Apr 29, 2012 11:45 am

This sword was said to have been created in the spirit of the Basilisk, god of serpents. This blade gives its wielder an unmatched ability to control all serpents and any creature that falls under this relation. This blade allows the user to use snakes as partners in fights and instantly stores all venoms or poisons that are affecting the wielder’s body into its composition making the venom or poison part of its blade or chakra arrows, therefore infecting anyone that it cuts with the poison. This ability is passive and will do this every time the wielder is infected with poison or venom, but it will only store the poison temporarily. When it takes in poison the poison lasts up to 8 posts maximum.

this sword effect, does it halt the poison it stores from you so if you were poisoned and the weapon stored it are you no longer poisoned also does this mean any user who uses snakes as a summoning etc lose there snakes to the blades power


Jutsu Name: Toroinomokuba kōgeki : Trojan Strike
Rank Aoi burēdo• mūn
Element: Ice
Type: KKG
Description: This technique does not require hand seals but does require the user to have at least the second level of the clan’s trade mark eyes to be unlocked. By loading chakra for one post and then making a T formation with their arms, the user will then struggle to break the X formation and end with their arms at the their sides. While trying to break the x formation immense chakra pressure rises protecting the user for that one post. Once the x formation is broken an explosion of crescent shaped blades made of chakra will shoot out up to 20 meters in all directions. Up to 300 crescent blades are shot out in random causing attacks to come out in a full diameter. This has a cool down of 8
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Jutsu Name: Burūchakura: Shikkusuāmuburourā: Blue Chakra: Six Arm Brawler
Rank: Aoi burēdo• mūn
Element: Ice
Type: KKG
Description:
This technique requires hand seals and that the user had obtained the second level of the trade mark eyes. This technique requires for the second or third level of these eyes to be activated. After completing the needed hand signs the user will keep his hands together, and as long as his hands stay together he/she can create six 21ft tall and 10 ft wide arms made of hard ice with clan type chakra inside. The ice is as durable as diamonds; it will take powerful A rank jutsu to destroy it. Once destroyed the blue chakra inside will release as an explosion of crescent shaped blades made purely of chakra. These blades scatter out with great speed and can cut through wood like butter. The purpose of these hands is so the user can use them to fight from a distance. They can range up to 50 meters in radius .The user can control each arm at will so long as they keep their hands together
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Jutsu Name: Ningen no shibakariki: Human Lawnmower
Rank: Aoi burēdo• mūn
Element: Ice
Type: KKG
Description: This technique requires hand seals and that the user had obtained the second level of the trade mark eyes. This technique requires for the second or third level of these eyes to be activated. After completing the needed hand signs the user will slam his/her hand on the ground and release 700 swift crescent shaped ice blades that only travels 1 foot off the ground. Each blade is infused with the clan’s lethal chakra which causes the blades to be able to cut through steel like butter. These blades are extremely fragile and travel at 5mph. This technique has a 4 post cool down.



Jutsu Name: Kōri no Shuriken Danmaku : Ice Shuriken Barrage
Rank: Aoi burēdo• mūn
Element: Ice
Type: KKG
Description: This technique requires hand seals and that the user had obtained the second level of the trade mark eyes. This technique requires for the second or third level of these eyes to be activated. After completing the needed hand signs the user will have blue glowing on his/her palms, in which he can shoot out over 100 ice shurikens from his hands. The shurikens travel at 20mph and can cut through stone like butter, because of the chakra coated on each one. This technique has a 3 post cool down.


Jutsu Name: Aishīburūsutingā : Icy Blue Stingers
Rank: Aoi burēdo• mūn
Element: Ice
Type: KKG
Description: This technique requires hand seals and that the user had obtained the second level of the trade mark eyes. This technique requires for the second or third level of these eyes to be activated. After completing the needed hand signs the user will have blue glowing on his palms, in which a swarm (1000) little bees made of ice with blue chakra inside them will speed from his/her hands. The bees travel at 40 mph and can cut through stone like butter, because of the chakra coated on each one. Although they can cut through the hardest stone with ease, they are also extremely fragile and can be destroyed by simply striking them or causing them to run into something stationary or any means of making contact with them. Upon being destroyed they release sharp chakras that will leave a small cut but deep cut on anything within 7 meters. These bees last 3 posts if not destroyed and can be directed by the user. This technique has a 5 post cool down.
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Jutsu Name: Suiso Kōri no Shuryūdan: Hydrogen Ice Grenade
Rank: Aoi burēdo• mūn
Element: Ice
Type: KKG
Description:
This is a jutsu that automatically takes place from the time the user uses one clan technique involving the ice element. This technique releases chakra which clings to certain chemicals that exists in the atmosphere in order to keep the entire are as cold as the user’s body, which for a clan member is extremely cold. This technique causes all wind like techniques to become colder, and all heat/fire related techniques to lessen drastically in temperature/effect. This technique is passive and does not require hand signs.

Jutsu Name: Kōri no Keimusho : Ice Prison

Rank: Aoi burēdo• mūn
Element: Ice
Type: KKG
Description: This technique requires hand seals and that the user had obtained the second level of the trade mark eyes. This technique requires for the second or third level of these eyes to be activated. After completing the needed hand signs a thousand ice swords will float from the ground and shape a doom. Once the opponents are trapped inside with the user the swords will cycle quickly making the doom nearly impossible to escape. The only way out is by using a power a ranked fire jutsu, and one must escape within the next post before it regenerates. The user however can phase in and out of the doom like a ghost. On the ground within the area of the doom, is a giant seal, and which will allow the user to phase into the seal and appear anywhere within the doom. The user can also use the swords as weapons by simply removing one from the cycle. The doom is very cold and carries the properties of the hydrogen ice grenade. If the user does not have fire technique there are many other ways out besides the obvious, which is by defeating the user of this technique. The cycling swords are sharp enough to cut even steel but if the opponent posses something much more durable then steel, they can stick it within the cycle and hold on tight to it. The sword’s cycle will be disrupted and they will smash against each other. Although there may be innovative ways of escaping, a powerful explosion will not cut it, since this prison was once used to contain prisoners or powerful explosive jutsus. This prison is only 20 meters in diameter. This technique has a 6 post cool down.



Jutsu Name: Teion shīru : Cryogenic Seal
Rank: Aoi burēdo• mūn
Element: Ice
Type: KKG
Description: This technique requires hand seals and that the user had obtained the second level of the trade mark eyes. This technique requires for the second or third level of these eyes to be activated. After completing the needed hand signs the user will have a word placed on their hand with chakra. Upon making contact with a person or object the word will appear on the person in a foreign language. If this seal makes contact with a living person or animal (which will be referred to as opponent) this seal will cause the body keep getting colder gradually. While the body gets colder the opponent(s)‘s bloodline or limited jutsu will be repelled, and their body will be forced to use chakra to keep the opponent warm and safe from harm. If the opponent(s) run out of chakra they can freeze up and die. If this word is placed on a weapon, the weapon will get extremely cold and will lose all abilities for as long as this seal remains the only way to break the seal is to be a high ranked seal user with unsealing techniques, or by finding the English version of the foreign word. Once the opponent(s) say the English version of the word out loud the seals are broken and all damage done is void, even if the person died from this technique they can always come back from there eternal sleep if the English version of their word is said out loud. All bodies that die do to this tech become impenetrable and immune to harm and decaying. This is so that if the word is discovered the victim can come back to life. This technique has a 6 post cool, but can be used on multiple people so long as the user touches with the same word within the same post.


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Jutsu Name: Reitōken : Frozen Sword
Rank: Kyūkyoku no burūburēdo-me
Element: Ice
Type: KKG
Description: This technique requires hand seals and that the user had obtained the third level of the trade mark eyes. This technique requires for the third level of these eyes to be activated. After completing the needed hand signs the user will gain an ice like sword resembling the picture below. When the user is ready to strike the back part of the blade will rotate so that the dull part of the blade rests on the arm from in between the two middle knuckles, in a position resembling wolverine claw. If this technique makes contact with a living human body it will instantly become chakra which will seep into the users body and completely freeze everything in that area(blood and all) causing extreme pain and possibly death. This technique last up to 4 posts and has a cool down of 6

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Jutsu Name: Zetsubō no Shīru : Seal of The Hopeless
Rank: : Kyūkyoku no burūburēdo-me
Element: KKG
Description: This technique requires hand seals and that the user had obtained the third level of the trade mark eyes. This technique requires for the third level of these eyes to be activated. After completing the needed hand signs the user will be able to seal the bodily function of any person that they make physical contact with for 3 posts. If contact is made the entire area in which a person is touched will lose function in that area and it will stiffen up like stone, unless the user can concentrate and provide A rank amount of chakra to the area. Example if the user makes contact with someone’s elbow the entire arm will go stiff. This technique will keep the user from using any kind of fuuinjutsu for two posts after it wears off. This technique has a cool down of 10 posts.


Jutsu Name: Fuyu wa jōshō : Winter Rising
Rank: Kyūkyoku no burūburēdo-me
Element: Ice
Type: KKG
Description: This technique requires hand seals and that the user had obtained the third level of the trade mark eyes. This technique requires for the third level of these eyes to be activated. After completing the needed hand signs the user will summon an entire snowy forest with no signs of life on it. The forest as snow up to 4 feet and slows people down by 30% if they do not have at least the first version of these eyes. The user is not slowed down and while in this environment the user will be able to do up to twice as many jutsus in a post so long as they are clan or ice related . This ice world ranges 100 meters and lasts 10 posts, but can only be used once a topic. The world is self rejuvenating and after the world is gone the user will be unable to use clan techniques for 5 posts.

these need to be ranked

Description: This technique requires hand seals. After completing the required seals, the user will have summoned his guardian angel, which will engulf the user and emanate of the user as a giant angel made of chakra. The user will then have the option of either keeping the monstrous angel around him or manifests the angels chakra into a weapon. There are three ways to execute this technique. One could be by making physical contact with the target; once physical contact is made the angel will instantly engulf the target and trap the target within its body. After doing such the angel will rise 70 meters above ground and then drop all the way to the bottom, upon hitting any surface this angel will explode with the target inside of it, causing a large 100 meter S ranked explosion. This technique can be done also with weapons, in which the weapon will have to make contact with the opponent to do the capture/explosion process. Finally this technique can be fired from the user’s body to grab the opponent. This can only go up to 50 meters, but cannot cause harm to those that they wish to protect. After using this technique, one will be very tired and unable to use any clan jutsu for five posts.

reduce the 100 meteres bit much, also does this protect you when the angel is around you,
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PostSubject: Re: Aiden Tetsujin   Sun Apr 29, 2012 12:09 pm

Yeah the sword takes poison from me and holds on to it for the remainder of the fight, the only way it gains poison though is if the user poisons himself, and no it does not control snake summons

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PostSubject: Re: Aiden Tetsujin   Sun Apr 29, 2012 1:52 pm

Hmm so that essentially means you have immunity to all types of poisons correct?

tsu Name: Teion shīru : Cryogenic Seal
Rank: S
Element: Ice
Type: KKG
Description: This technique requires hand seals and that the user had obtained the second level of the trade mark eyes. This technique requires for the second or third level of these eyes to be activated. After completing the needed hand signs the user will have a word placed on their hand with chakra. Upon making contact with a person or object the word will appear on the person in a foreign language. If this seal makes contact with a living person or animal (which will be referred to as opponent) this seal will cause the body keep getting colder gradually. While the body gets colder the opponent(s)‘s bloodline or limited jutsu will be repelled, and their body will be forced to use chakra to keep the opponent warm and safe from harm. If the opponent(s) run out of chakra they can freeze up and die. If this word is placed on a weapon, the weapon will get extremely cold and will lose all abilities for as long as this seal remains the only way to break the seal is to be a high ranked seal user with unsealing techniques, or by finding the English version of the foreign word. Once the opponent(s) say the English version of the word out loud the seals are broken and all damage done is void, even if the person died from this technique they can always come back from there eternal sleep if the English version of their word is said out loud. All bodies that die do to this tech become impenetrable and immune to harm and decaying. This is so that if the word is discovered the victim can come back to life. This technique has a 6 post cool, but can be used on multiple people so long as the user touches with the same word within the same post.

remove the part about bloodline and lmited jutsu being repelled
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PostSubject: Re: Aiden Tetsujin   Sun Apr 29, 2012 2:51 pm

Essentially Yes, but thats the sword's ability, not my own.


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PostSubject: Re: Aiden Tetsujin   Sun Apr 29, 2012 3:38 pm

Approved
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PostSubject: Re: Aiden Tetsujin   Sun Apr 29, 2012 8:30 pm

Umm no DENIED

you are not being immune to all poisons then being able to fully copy them
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PostSubject: Re: Aiden Tetsujin   Mon May 21, 2012 10:06 pm

Approval from me.

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PostSubject: Re: Aiden Tetsujin   Tue May 22, 2012 6:30 am

Approved also

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